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Old 06-23-2009, 09:05 AM   #5 (permalink)
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The site is nice, but the header image is too big. Its weighing in at 56.05 KB (57391 bytes) - which is 1/2 of the recommended maximum size for a webpage.

The long links at the bottom of the page look tachy and unprofessional. Stream line them so they are not so long.

Your meta description is too long and full of trash words

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<meta name="Description" content="Nitro radio controlled cars, we also offer a selection of petrol remote control car and nitro cars. Offering rc petrol cars and rc helicopter selection." />
Trash words include we, also, offer, a of, and, rc. RC can stand for RC cola, Radio controlled,,,, and probably several other things.

A meta description like

Quote:
Nitro radio controlled cars and helicopter
Would probably serve you a lot better.
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