eimai145, 'super clean and really understated' to me translates into minimalism. I like the concept you've drawn out but its fluidity just seems a little off. Fine tuning it would work but it'll still seem a little generic so here's what I came up with.
Using the concept of letters being pushed, or, given a boost, I came up with this, the same logo/concept just different variations. Let me know what you think
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note: colour could be changed to green as specified in your first post, but I went with the concept and colour you used in your example.