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Michael Schlottfeld · 02-24-2005, 03:56 AM

I made some revisions to the text on the home page of whalesale.com and would like to know what you think. Does this text make you feel secure and ready to purchase?
Should I move any part of it around? or Change any of it?

Thank you for your input.
It is much appreciated.

02-24-2005, 03:56 AM	#1 (permalink)
Michael Schlottfeld Inactive Join Date: 04-27-04 Location: Sayreville, NJ Posts: 101 iTrader: 0 / 0% Latest Blog: None	Please comment on marketing text I made some revisions to the text on the home page of whalesale.com and would like to know what you think. Does this text make you feel secure and ready to purchase? Should I move any part of it around? or Change any of it? Thank you for your input. It is much appreciated.