Not bad...
The large glowing snakes seem out of place, they look too thick or something... they seem non-proportional to the rest of the pic ... I think they would look more proportional if they were filaments of random veins of arcing, but not too densely packed ...
like "life cypher",,,, that one is proportional... I like that one... : )
"Another" is good.... I love very graphic stuff like that,,, gives my senses a nice little fix... : )