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Originally Posted by Cornbread
Yea after reading the title and sub title, it's confusing, the subject of the article isn't clear. Simplify, focus and shorten the title and sub title.
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Would this title be more "in focus?"
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Or maybe...
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I like the first one because it leaves the reader a little curious. Like a teaser.
I am still kicking around some other ideas.
RD