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A few things I notice right off the bat.
The text compared to the graphic is woefully out of balance. If anything, the text should be larger and the graphic smaller. Keeping in mind that it should work at sticker size, business card size, website header or banner and any other number mediums. Since it’s for a band, my first consideration is sticker size and the bands name not being prominent enough.
Since (I’m assuming here) the band is called “The Lawnmower Incident” maybe just a chopped up hand would work. With some fingers missing. That can be done fairly easily with much less detail getting lost when shrunk down or being too busy and seems to me to be more an incident than a massacre.
I think the concept is sound (a chopped up something-somethin) but the execution could use some work.
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