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First impression was: oh god a parked site. Didn't hold my attention after looking around the first page. It gave me no reason to look future. I still don't know what it is.
You really need something to hold their attention. If people have to look around to figure what you're about, they won't stay. It's to easy to click "back" than read your site. What your about need to catch their attention right off the bat.
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