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1. The top part of the webpage is the part people tend to look at first.
You're not doing much with that area but filling it with a distracting blue
background. It distracts from the rest of your website.
2. You need to entice the users and tease them.
Maybe you can make these girls say whatever you think
your target audience: lonely guys want to hear.
3. Look at other sites that sell well and analyze why. Then you'll know.
4. There is no urgent call to action. What is the user suppose to do?
Guide them, or they will end up doing nothing at all.
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