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Old 08-06-2004, 12:31 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Church preschool site

what do you think of the general design its pretty much for the parents to check updates with. The church asked it i could throw something together.
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Looks good. The title and tag line look just slightly out of place. Maybe just a few pixels to low or too high. Still look very good though.
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It looks good, but I would expect it to be more preschool-y - maybe more colorful and less square.
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Too techno and straight. Needs brightening up and some photos. Loose the v 1.0 thing.
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Yes to the caption allignment comments and to the v 1.0 thing. But I have a sense that the site is for parents rather than preschoolers, so if I correctly understand the term "preschool-y", I would not go for it.

As a parent I always found it very confusing to have to click some stupid flower or some little clown jumping out of the box.
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Overall I really like the design. Clean, straight-forward and looks like it will be easy to navigate. While you don't need clowns jumping out of a box (lol), maybe a bit more of a pre-schooly look would be appropriate. To me the fancy font doesn't work quite right with the cool-blue techno look as well. But, again, I do like the design as a design.
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littleFella, I am not talking about clowns jumping out of boxes. Just some subtle kid-like stuff to make it seem more like a site for a preschool.

Maybe a more colorful site with some photos and graphics incorporated into the design.
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littleFella, I am not talking about clowns jumping out of boxes. Just some subtle kid-like stuff to make it seem more like a site for a preschool.

Maybe a more colorful site with some photos and graphics incorporated into the design.
I guess the word "preschool-y" just brought a different idea to my mind. I was imagining all those colorful creaters with heads larger than their bodies and stick-like bodies
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If you change the fonts on that template, you have a counterstrike clan looking thing.

an example of a pre-school site:


http://www.brightminds.co.uk/gshop.asp
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I did I little site for a church children's program you can see as another example.

http://www.firstbc.org/cfm/
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For kids take a look at http://pbskids.org/sesame/

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