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Old 09-07-2004, 05:21 PM   #1 (permalink)
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What do you think about this graphic? too plain? please feed me with ALLL of your suggestions!
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Old 09-07-2004, 05:23 PM   #2 (permalink)
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It's pretty good, maybe add some quirkyness to the house. Bare in mind all the other rent type site logos.
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Old 09-07-2004, 05:24 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I actually like it... I would maybe suggest making the font a bit bigger... and instead of a house, maybe a more appartment look?
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Old 09-07-2004, 05:24 PM   #4 (permalink)
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i haven't even looked at any... i don't want to accidentally borrow ideas
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Old 09-07-2004, 05:25 PM   #5 (permalink)
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It says apartment search, but that is a house. (Edit - thebassman beat me to it.)

It looks like there should be a window or something on the house. Just something simple to break up all the blank space.
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Old 09-07-2004, 05:42 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Whats a more apartment look though?
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Old 09-07-2004, 05:45 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Hehe... I beat ya, Sara. I think maybe a more vertical look might work for ya... like a 4 story apartment w/ windows or something...
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Old 09-07-2004, 05:54 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I'd try having 2 or 3 skyscraper style buildings instead of the house.

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Old 09-07-2004, 05:59 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I think maybe a more vertical look might work for ya... like a 4 story apartment w/ windows or something...
Yea. More like just a big rectangle with some squares on it as windows. Keeping it simple like the house.
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Old 09-07-2004, 06:12 PM   #10 (permalink)
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yeah, what sara said.
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Old 09-07-2004, 06:26 PM   #11 (permalink)
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what if i just showed rooftop... not any height at all?
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Old 09-07-2004, 06:36 PM   #12 (permalink)
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like this? ignore the headroom...

apt's have roof's... this is just a generalization... whatcha think?
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Old 09-07-2004, 06:55 PM   #13 (permalink)
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a cornered roof doesn't say appartment to me... It says house...
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Old 09-07-2004, 07:21 PM   #14 (permalink)
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Looks good but I would get rid of the gradient. It will make it harder to print.
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Old 09-07-2004, 07:25 PM   #15 (permalink)
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does he say its for printing?
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a cornered roof doesn't say appartment to me... It says house...
Ditto. It has to be rectangle to say apartment. I think the windows are a must, too
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What kind of apartments do you all live near? lol.

I like the graphic.
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Old 09-07-2004, 07:31 PM   #18 (permalink)
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we have no high rise apts... i don't think it would fit out city well... the highest we have are 3 story apt buildings... should that make a difference?

i'm really enjoying the comments... it's making me think alot about this project and the way i try to identify a project... please don't stop with the comments
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Looks good but I would get rid of the gradient. It will make it harder to print.
it won't really be for printing... strictly an online business... but i understand what you're saying... if i decided to start printing it... i would probably change the gradiant
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