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Inochi · 09-12-2004, 02:56 PM

Just something I made real quick.

Im wondering what you guys think

Fusion · 09-12-2004, 03:11 PM

Makes no sense to me. Freedom of mind? Im pretty sure you're not a copywriter. What exactly did you make? The lighting is majorily messed up aswell. Sorry if that offends you but Im not here to say the obligatory "cool" or "looks good".

Inochi · 09-12-2004, 03:17 PM

hehe, im glad you dont have the obligatory 'cuz this is comment I can use

I made the picture yesterday at the pool.
I wanted a vague, dark, human shape agains a blue sky.

The title is a bit harder to explain. It didn't fall out of mid air, and most deffinitly has a story behind it, but it's kinda hard to explain in english

Now about the lighting: what part do you think is messed up?

thebassman · 09-12-2004, 03:21 PM

The guy either needs to be lighter or darker - he's too "in-between" still

Fusion · 09-12-2004, 03:25 PM

Well that's good. I find it confusing like its the middle of the day, and its almost a complete shadow effect. This might be the case if the sun light was immediately behind him. This doesn't look like the case -- am I correct in this statement? Overall it could be pretty neat; kinda reminds me of a davidoff advert, but with some odd differences.

Inochi · 09-12-2004, 03:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by thebassman

The guy either needs to be lighter or darker - he's too "in-between" still

i dunno, l like it like this 'cus it aint one whole black shape

i tried it like that, but it kinda screws up the picture

thanks for commenting

thebassman · 09-12-2004, 03:28 PM

When I get home, I'll play around with it and post it back up here and on your thread @ PhotographyCorner, if you don't mind... I'll see if I can do anything with it... hehe. (And hey, everyone, Inochi entered a Contest Corner Challenge on PhotographyCorner, and is currently leading the voting to win!)