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Old 09-25-2004, 12:59 AM
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This sucks

I dont have much imagenation an talent yet some ideas?

and i cant spell lol
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Old 09-25-2004, 01:04 AM
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I don't think it sucks.

The text on the right seems a bit fuzzy to me.
 
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Old 09-25-2004, 06:51 AM
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it needs color.
 
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Old 09-25-2004, 06:54 AM
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More color, less shadow.
 
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Old 09-25-2004, 08:49 AM
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I like the shadow. I dunon why some people instantly dont like shadows. Even google.com has a big shadow behind it
 
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Old 09-25-2004, 09:14 AM
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I like the shadow. I dunon why some people instantly dont like shadows. Even google.com has a big shadow behind it
Dont let Google pollute your mind!
 
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Old 09-25-2004, 09:15 AM
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no, google is our creator
 
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Old 09-25-2004, 10:49 AM
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I like the shadow. I dunon why some people instantly dont like shadows.
I like them too.

I think it's just personal preferrence. I think that they often lend desirable dynamics, where to some it may lend an unclean or cluttered look.

I also like bevels, gradients etc..
 
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Old 09-25-2004, 10:52 AM
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Shadows are great when they are subtle, this one is just very dark and makes it difficult to read the text. If the shadow is done well, nobody will mention it because it'll blend properly.
 
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Old 09-25-2004, 10:58 AM
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Yeah good point, ^ too high an opacity can ruin the effect for many.
 
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Old 09-25-2004, 12:28 PM
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Shadows are great when they are subtle, this one is just very dark and makes it difficult to read the text. If the shadow is done well, nobody will mention it because it'll blend properly.
Exactly.

I think it might look better if the shadow was a little lighter and there was a little less distance between the shadow and the letters.
 
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Old 09-26-2004, 03:17 AM
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Is this any better ideas input? you said color lol here it is. Or should I work with other design? By the way its supposed to go on www.onway.us
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Old 09-26-2004, 08:32 AM
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The words on the right are too blurry. Hurts my eyes.
 
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Old 09-26-2004, 09:20 AM
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the red background is a change for the better i think.
 
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