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10-13-2003, 01:14 PM
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Flanube 001
a template i made right quick during design class today in school. too much going on i think but i dunno, what do you think?

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10-13-2003, 01:16 PM
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I like it.
The only thing is I would cut some off the bottom.
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10-13-2003, 01:18 PM
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yea i just realized that, o well itd just be the bg color anyway. thanks btw
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10-13-2003, 01:33 PM
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Yeah, I suppose it would be but it might make it a little bit smaller (image size I mean)
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10-13-2003, 01:38 PM
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The words in the toolbar need to a sharper.
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10-13-2003, 01:46 PM
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Yeah they hurt my eyes a bit
Thanol - Junior Member - Shouldn't that be changed?
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10-13-2003, 01:59 PM
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i dont like it, needs colors
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10-13-2003, 01:59 PM
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needs colors?! what the heck? i dont see a black and white image up there...
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10-13-2003, 02:01 PM
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i see a blue gradient, light blue, dark blue
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10-13-2003, 02:03 PM
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theres a total of 3 colors, 2 blues and a maroonish color...too many colors is never a good thing.
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10-13-2003, 02:10 PM
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I like it not having too many colors...
I don't know, I may be...err...wait...am...a little weird. 
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10-13-2003, 02:51 PM
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i like this one, the other one is a little too plain
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10-13-2003, 02:52 PM
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Looks like Microsoft Word Art 
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10-13-2003, 02:53 PM
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lol not word art, just some thingy in photoshop
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10-13-2003, 02:59 PM
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The 2 blues don't match, IMO. 
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10-13-2003, 03:12 PM
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Originally Posted by Brian
The 2 blues don't match, IMO. 
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I agree. The words in the nav are a bit hard to read, too.
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