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Banner for my site
Hey guys, wondering if you could give me some input, tell me what sucks about this banner (go ahead and be an mean about it, any opinions are helpful right now)
Also the image will change on this post since its on my site when I make changes.
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11-16-2003, 02:26 AM
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The text is hard to read and the bees need some improvements. 
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11-16-2003, 02:27 AM
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What kind of "improvements" and yeah now that i look it is hard to read *note to self: unzoom before posting*
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11-16-2003, 02:29 AM
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Good idea!
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Ok, i think this is easier to read, and sets the text as its own from the bees....
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but your text is still hard to read. Maybe try to add an outer glow or change its color.
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11-16-2003, 02:42 AM
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It has an outer glow, is it maybe too small? i reduced the outer glow because i thought maybe that's what made it hard to read....
I made the text bigger, does that work...
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Try to change your font or something.
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Needs more yellow.
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11-16-2003, 09:29 AM
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needs more color varation
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11-16-2003, 09:58 AM
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Heh erg originally it did! thought it was too much color =\ Ok, I'll try some things
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Made a new one, tell me if you think its better.
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11-16-2003, 05:50 PM
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can't read the bottom one at all.
I'd get back to the drawing board, try to lighten it up a bit, it looks far too dark and gloomy atm i reckon.
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make the text on the second one white or yellow and see how it looks
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its ok.
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yellow... and white 
i personally like white, and good suggestion btw
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The yellow balances out the color. Maybe try a gradient on the text yellow/white?
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11-16-2003, 06:16 PM
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The B looks like an R.
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11-16-2003, 06:18 PM
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that's the font =X
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You should use a different font.
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