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Old 11-16-2003, 12:45 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Not so good wallpaper

Hey guys, since im trying to learn adobe and stuff i made this wallpaper just to see how things work and what people would think of it. Please give me some constructive criticism.
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Old 11-16-2003, 12:46 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Cool texture!
Just can't read the text.
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Old 11-16-2003, 12:56 PM   #3 (permalink)
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reminds me of a geographical relief map ... interesting effect .... a bit dark and drab though ... not sure if this is important to you or not but, it's very difficult to read the text, as drummer pointed out...
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Old 11-16-2003, 12:57 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Ok i fixed the text, but im wondering is there a better format to save it in maybe? because it loses quite a bit when i save as gif....
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Old 11-16-2003, 01:14 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Save as .jpg.
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Old 11-16-2003, 01:24 PM   #7 (permalink)
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So does this look better to you guys then? (i think there's a huge dif thanx for the info)
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Old 11-16-2003, 01:38 PM   #8 (permalink)
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the text does... yeah
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nice render

u made that in PS?
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Old 11-16-2003, 02:29 PM   #10 (permalink)
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yes made it entirely in PS cuz im trying to learn to use it.
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Old 11-16-2003, 02:30 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Try to make an other layer below it, with a different colro or something, and change the Oppacity of the top layer...

My guess is that it will increase the depth perseption of the image...but i might be wrong
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Ok well I messed around with the under layer for a bit, these are what i got...
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1st one looks like your scuba diving, 2nd looks like water
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try some light effects on them aswell..
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Old 11-16-2003, 02:53 PM   #16 (permalink)
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... Its definitely alot better than when i started
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Old 11-16-2003, 03:27 PM   #17 (permalink)
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nice, now make the text look as slick.
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i like the text... plus i dunno what to do to make text fancy other than a few blending options (as you may have noticed)
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yeah it's not too bad but all i've seen u use is the gradient fill and inner bevel.

More fonts more layers, different colours, bigger text.
Make the text into an image rather than just some words.
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How tho, whenever i do anything to the text it looks like crap, and i don't know where to get custom fonts.
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