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10-28-2004, 03:58 AM
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Enforce freedom
I was bored this evening and felt like doing something to pass the time. Its all pen tool goodness, I never use the pen tool so this was good practice.
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10-28-2004, 04:31 AM
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looks good, love this type of style
something looks a bit off, the perspective in the top part of the ship
photoshop or illustrator ?
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10-28-2004, 05:37 AM
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Looks great. I can't get the hang of the pen tool.
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10-28-2004, 05:41 AM
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Cool, good job
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10-28-2004, 06:37 AM
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Looks real good.... You should sell the idea for T-Shirts or something... or at least decals. Or sell them yourself...
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10-28-2004, 09:36 AM
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Very good.
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10-28-2004, 12:22 PM
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I don't care for this style of art but this looks pretty good.
I haven't gotten the hang of the pen tool either, Jazzee.
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10-28-2004, 12:32 PM
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Looks really good, great for a political banner
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10-28-2004, 12:39 PM
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This is what the "enforce freedom" banner would be like down the town  Your like a natural mural artist |
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10-28-2004, 12:42 PM
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^^^^
Hahahaa thats awesome.
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looks good, love this type of style
something looks a bit off, the perspective in the top part of the ship
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Yeah, the perspective of the whole thing is really warped. I did it in photoshop as well, I can't afford illustrator 
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Looks real good.... You should sell the idea for T-Shirts or something... or at least decals. Or sell them yourself...
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I was thinking that, It'd make a cool t-shirt.
I've been wanting to start a t-shirt company for a while, maybe I'll save up a bunch of designs and try to find some cash to get started with. |
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10-28-2004, 12:57 PM
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The T-Shirt thing would be a cool idea. Especially that design will work now you know. Even to get decals made up to sell them. I work for a decal company if you were interested im getting them made. PM me if you want the web address. We make full color vinyl decals and die cut vinyl decals. Let me know.
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10-28-2004, 01:08 PM
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Real good that. Id like to see it in diff colors.
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10-28-2004, 03:02 PM
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Cool!
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10-28-2004, 03:26 PM
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I made a few changes and such, heres the new version:
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10-28-2004, 03:51 PM
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Better IMO ... more style.. neet font ..
might try some diff colors too..
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10-28-2004, 04:10 PM
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I think try a different font for the new one you made... It kind of looks like a "comic book" font... The flag was a real nice touch....
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10-28-2004, 04:19 PM
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Well the art style is cartoonish so I thought the new font matched pretty well... I dunno
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10-28-2004, 04:20 PM
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Not in a sense where it is Marvel Comics... It's more on a serious note than on a "funny" "playful" note... See what I mean?
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10-28-2004, 04:35 PM
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Yes .... but I see the graphic as sarcastic and I'm thinking an element of playful as appropriate.
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10-28-2004, 04:44 PM
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Yes .... but I see the graphic as sarcastic and I'm thinking an element of playful as appropriate.
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You get it. I think the font goes well with sticking to the 40's propaganda style of art. |
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