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11-22-2003, 11:34 AM
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its suppose to be very grudgy
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11-22-2003, 11:42 AM
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I'd go for your design without a doubt.
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11-22-2003, 11:44 AM
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Yes, yours is a lot better. But take out the grunge from the nav and take out some of the grunge overall. It has too much IMO
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11-22-2003, 11:45 AM
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the grude on the nav is really from the header.
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11-22-2003, 11:46 AM
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Well put the stuff in the nav on top of the grunge, I think the nav should be easy to read
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11-22-2003, 11:48 AM
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better?
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11-22-2003, 11:49 AM
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I think the header graphic is too big.
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11-22-2003, 11:51 AM
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yeah, it is kinda big, but its suppose to kinda resemble a long time or something like a letter
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11-22-2003, 11:59 AM
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Yah its better
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11-22-2003, 12:27 PM
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Yours is better but learn to optimise your images properly. I know it isn't cut up but that is a huge old image you have there.
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11-22-2003, 05:58 PM
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is it soo young or so young? like grammar wise ur site is better but too grungy imo try it html'ised with an easier to read font .. but its good also
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11-22-2003, 06:27 PM
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its still so young and i didnt write any of that, i they sent me what they want writen
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11-22-2003, 08:04 PM
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I like yours a lot more but it still needs a little work.. maybe lowering the opacity on the grunge effects.. it's too black / white / red - get more variance in the tones of each of those colors.
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11-22-2003, 09:06 PM
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The tennis net as the background for the content doesn't fit in with the overall design IMO.
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11-23-2003, 10:46 AM
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its not a tennis net, its a guitar, the end of one
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11-23-2003, 11:02 AM
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Looks awesome, Stealth.
I'm really diggin' that design!
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11-23-2003, 02:31 PM
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i like it, but itsn't it obvious that yours is alot better
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