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Old 01-16-2005, 01:35 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Old 01-16-2005, 03:15 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Looks good..

Try a little color on it, see if it looks better..
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Old 01-16-2005, 07:00 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Why no phone number? The name and the picture look too close to the right and bottom edge.

Other than that, looks good.
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Old 01-16-2005, 07:31 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I would put a phone no. on the card and probably drop the AIM.

Possibly also include what genre's of music you specialise in...
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Old 01-16-2005, 09:26 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I'd say put a BG on it and make it busy since you're a DJ. It'll look nice
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Old 01-16-2005, 09:30 AM   #6 (permalink)
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It's way to plain! Get some stuff in there! That clip art looks cheesy, and so does the font. Loose the AIM and I would get rid of your email unless you can make it look professional. Put some more information in there also - color too.
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Old 01-16-2005, 09:32 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Why no phone number? The name and the picture look too close to the right and bottom edge.

Other than that, looks good.
so people can prank call me? j/j yea, im thinking about it.

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busy? got an example of a bg?

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i do any kind of music, think i should just put that on there? or leave it blank?
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Old 01-16-2005, 09:38 AM   #8 (permalink)
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It's way to plain! Get some stuff in there! That clip art looks cheesy, and so does the font. Loose the AIM and I would get rid of your email unless you can make it look professional. Put some more information in there also - color too.
i dont want to put too much information couse it makes people wonder, like what phil suggested awhile back.
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Old 01-16-2005, 09:54 AM   #9 (permalink)
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Makes people wonder what?
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Old 01-16-2005, 09:58 AM   #10 (permalink)
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If you put less info, people are curious to see what the card is for and you get calls just out of the blue
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Old 01-16-2005, 10:24 AM   #11 (permalink)
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If you put less info, people are curious to see what the card is for and you get calls just out of the blue
Exactly. You want people to call you if they are interested in your services not just to call and ask questions.

So yes, take off the aim... add a # and add the genre of music you play.

Thats my thoughts.
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Old 01-16-2005, 10:44 AM   #12 (permalink)
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i do any kind of music, think i should just put that on there? or leave it blank?
IMO I would target a certain scene, presumably your into trance music? I would go that kind of direction, get yourself established as playing a certain kind of sound, you'll get more business that way.
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Old 01-16-2005, 10:51 AM   #13 (permalink)
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IMO I would target a certain scene, presumably your into trance music? I would go that kind of direction, get yourself established as playing a certain kind of sound, you'll get more business that way.
in ohio? when i go to england ile do that...
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Old 01-16-2005, 11:03 AM   #14 (permalink)
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I thought the rave/trance scene was pretty big in the States? Can't be smaller than Sydney's scene...
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Old 01-16-2005, 11:06 AM   #15 (permalink)
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trance in the states is pretty underground. thats why my msn list on msn is so big with people from other countrys. i plan on playing trance in the states.. but its pretty underground.
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tell me... is there any freeform djs in the states, tunes like kevin energy plays?
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WTF is AIM, get rid of that ****e, noone goes to AIM if they want a DJ.
Get a phone number on it and add colour
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