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03-27-2005, 01:13 PM
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The McLickerator
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03-27-2005, 01:22 PM
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I like it. The only thing that I personally would do, is smooth the outside of the stroke on the underside of the fingertips.
Sensational.
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03-27-2005, 01:28 PM
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good call atom... i noticed that too and fixed the psd but havent changed the page.. also the nail on the middle finger is a little wonky on the left hand side too...
thanks for looking!
everytime i look at it i get that 'na na na na na na na na naaaaa' sound in my head.
lol
***edit - okay fixed it
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03-27-2005, 01:42 PM
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Yeah, you could smooth the fingernail too but, actually I think that would pass, I would probably end up smoothing it anyway though, myself .. lol
I really like graphics that speak primarily to my senses, like music does. This one definitely does. Neet colors/combos too.
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03-27-2005, 01:45 PM
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Yeah, that's better ... I would consider doing under the little finger too, but I think that I have OCD so, pay no attention to me. LOL
Looks good ..
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03-27-2005, 01:46 PM
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thanks mang!
im a little iffy on the light-orange behind the figure. it looks kinda plain. im for it - i think it adds some simplicity to it and i dont think i need to gussy it up persay - but theres always something i suppose.
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03-27-2005, 01:53 PM
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I find the plain light orange an interesting contrast. Gives it sort of a positive lift I think.
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03-27-2005, 01:56 PM
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to bad you cant make the "cartoon" part in vector, unless you have plug-ins, flash or svg, would make the lines in your "dude" more like lines, or make it more like the gta vector arts http://ebgames.com/ebx_assets/wallpapers/lady_1024.jpg un-even lines
looks good
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03-27-2005, 02:00 PM
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Yeah, and the black stroke around the grey circle too.. it would smooth that right out. I avoid Illustrator like the plague because I haven't really learned it yet and it's a chore and I'm a bit lazy I guess.. lol
I've got to force myself to get in there and fool around more. I don't even really know how to use AI yet.
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03-27-2005, 01:57 PM
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i tried that ricoool. it did work but i found it reworked the lines too much at the head and changed the whole feel.
i could certainly go back and clean it up - thats always a possibility.
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03-27-2005, 02:57 PM
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I would change the style of the background wings to make it more 2d, right now it sticks out because the character is completely 2d and the background is semi-3d. If they were both flat it would flow better.
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03-27-2005, 03:34 PM
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Looks good. Colors like that probably would be hard to work with.
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03-27-2005, 08:37 PM
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Make the "enter" text part of the graphic and add nice effects too it...
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03-28-2005, 12:10 PM
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Make the "enter" text part of the graphic
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agree totaly, I don't think that font fits the rest of the design, also you might as well do it as an image. I take it the enter is meant to sit inside the brown stripe? On a Mac it floats over the top of it (Firefox and Safari)
I like the rest of it, looks good.
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