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12-01-2003, 05:57 PM
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Tryin out a banner, tell me what you think....
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12-01-2003, 05:58 PM
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I don't see it  |
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12-01-2003, 05:59 PM
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Yah I don't either, I see it on my PC and I'm uploadin the right one.
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12-01-2003, 06:04 PM
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There....
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12-01-2003, 06:07 PM
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Looks great  |
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12-01-2003, 06:10 PM
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Would it be a good one to give to other people to use?
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12-01-2003, 06:13 PM
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looks great!
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12-01-2003, 06:13 PM
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yeah
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12-01-2003, 06:17 PM
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Thanks, there's this one too:
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12-01-2003, 06:18 PM
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I would lose the "Expert" and the "&". Then I would give them to people to use.
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12-01-2003, 06:19 PM
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looks good
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12-01-2003, 06:19 PM
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I like it alot, if you are going to do the pattern fade it a little more, where it is almost not seen. Very nice though. Maybe darkent the text a little more it is a little hard to read with the light color and that font
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12-01-2003, 06:22 PM
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Thanks, I'll work on that.
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Originally Posted by Jazzee
I would lose the "Expert" and the "&". Then I would give them to people to use.
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So have it be like:
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12-01-2003, 06:23 PM
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Yea. But that is only my opinion. Anyone else have any thoughts?
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12-01-2003, 06:33 PM
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I think I should keep the and, it doesn't sound right without it....
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12-01-2003, 06:35 PM
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Originally Posted by Pimpen 2010
I think I should keep the and, it doesn't sound right without it....
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OK  Looks good! |
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12-01-2003, 06:36 PM
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I like that last one, and I agree with jazzee on the expert, but I agree the & should stay
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12-01-2003, 06:43 PM
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Welp done deal. I really like this banner so I guess I'll give it to people!
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12-01-2003, 07:03 PM
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Love it, Phil!
I just don't like the font you chose for the text on the right side. I'm thinking something a little smaller.
But it'll work as is, just a minor flaw.
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12-01-2003, 07:12 PM
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If more people agree I'll change it.... But thanks for pointin that out
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