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Old 08-09-2005, 08:43 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Header suggestions

This isn't far enough along to make it into website review, so I hope graphic design will do.

I'm looking for suggestions on this header. I know it's hurting now, so a simple "that sucks" won't help. I'm especially concerned about the right side.

Thanks for any help you can offer.

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Old 08-09-2005, 08:47 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I think it looks good...so far.

Maybe add more pictures or a background image (maybe some people?) to the middle area.
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I agree. I think it looks good so far. Just need to fill in that middle space. I'd say add a background image.
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Actually, at second glance, it looks like the green matches too closely to the page background. Try a lighter green (image or BG)
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I think maybe a bg pic for the center part of some trees or a forest or something would match nicely....
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I like the blank area, it is calming, otherwise what about a background images that display the area from a distance maybe with some morning mist.

Unless the logo part has to look like that I would make some space before and move the "duck" a bit more to the right, it looks a little compressed.

I think you need to play with the composition on the right, there is a problem with the lighting of the images on the right and something about the drop shadow bug's me.
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Yeah, looks very good to me.
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