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08-14-2005, 11:43 PM
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08-15-2005, 12:50 AM
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I like that Atom, the right side is the best, I like what the Cat (?) is doing.. It looks like he is throwing stuff into the sky / or sucking in...
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08-15-2005, 01:06 AM
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Originally Posted by mickok
I like that Atom, the right side is the best, I like what the Cat (?) is doing.. It looks like he is throwing stuff into the sky / or sucking in...
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I'm glad that you like it. The "cat" I drew from scratch, I had no specific creature in mind as I was creating it.
It is just some sort of creature. lol
I created what it is holding as well, and also had no specific object in mind.
It is just some sort of device. lol
I don't think that I am done with this.
Fun stuff.. gotta be in the mood though ..
I haven't been able to touch it for two days now.
Maybe tomorrow I'll do something more to it.
If anyone has any suggestions, I'd like to hear them.
I think that the cloud gun that the creature in the tewk is operating is too opaque, don't you?
I don't know that red is really right for that, either.
Last edited by Atom : 08-15-2005 at 01:18 AM.
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08-15-2005, 03:57 AM
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I don't think the red in on the left is correct, but on the right hand side where it blends into your name that looks great, also near your name the cloud seems to drop a little and a line appears you should try and make that a lot smoother. I think with the black bird type thing on the left side, that should be more white, that would look great. There are some suggestions but it already looks awesome.
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08-15-2005, 07:34 AM
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I love the signature 
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08-26-2005, 02:09 AM
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Whoops....
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09-07-2005, 08:27 PM
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Originally Posted by DOS
I love the signature 
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Thanks, DOS.
It's a font called creepygirl .. that I played around with some.
Last edited by Atom : 09-07-2005 at 08:31 PM.
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09-08-2005, 07:31 AM
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Nice one Atom! I guess it is a great looking wallpaper for peeps with double screens.
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09-08-2005, 02:53 PM
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Originally Posted by Ferre
Nice one Atom! I guess it is a great looking wallpaper for peeps with double screens.
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Thanks, Ferre ..
.. yeah, I thought I'd try a little something different.
Seeing Spiral's last site creation inspired me to try the wide image technique.
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09-09-2005, 01:55 PM
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I do not see anything. Can you provide a link?
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09-09-2005, 01:57 PM
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Originally Posted by SN3
I do not see anything. Can you provide a link?
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Try refreshing.
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09-09-2005, 02:01 PM
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I get a red X now also Atom, and your main site gives me this message...
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You are not authorized to view this page
You might not have permission to view this directory or page using the
credentials you supplied.If you believe you should be able to view this
directory or page, please try to contact the Web site by using any e-mail
address or phone number that may be listed on the Homepage();
www.singlesplaces.com home page.
You can click Search to look for information on the Internet.
HTTP Error 403 - Forbidden
Internet Explorer
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09-09-2005, 02:28 PM
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Originally Posted by Ferre
I get a red X now also Atom, and your main site gives me this message...

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Geez .. I don't know what the heck is going on because I can view both the image and my site.
I do know, however, that we are not able to access the server anymore and are in the process of switching hosts.
Our server info is in a .tar file waiting for me to transfer it to the new server,
but I was and am under the impression that the files are still being hosted
until the transfer is complete.
I don't know ... they must be doing something though if you guys are getting these messages,
because I know that major changes are taking place currently with this host.
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09-13-2005, 01:43 PM
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Your single image(goldpg.jpg) is 81 Kb. I think it's not reasonable. Having 81 Kb of graphic it is possible to create very complex-good-looking page.
I apologise for my severe criticism.
[Posted by 83.149.40.8.
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09-13-2005, 01:57 PM
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Originally Posted by Yri
Your single image(goldpg.jpg) is 81 Kb. I think it's not reasonable.
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I agree that it is not reasonable.
That site was created before I realized the importance of optimizing,
(is my first and only site, created almost three years ago)
and I just have never bothered to reduce the image sizes thus far.
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Originally Posted by Yri
Having 81 Kb of graphic it is possible to create very complex-good-looking page.
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I am aware of this.
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Originally Posted by Yri
I apologise for my severe criticism.
[Posted by 83.149.40.8.
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Apology accepted, and I thank you for the tips. 
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09-14-2005, 03:09 PM
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that is beautiful. but i dont get the message.....
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09-14-2005, 06:11 PM
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Originally Posted by @thena
that is beautiful. ..
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Thank you.
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Originally Posted by @thena
but i dont get the message.....
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Me either .. 
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09-15-2005, 04:25 AM
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i think the creature and the sign part better the the left
the red X isn't good
i think
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