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12-10-2003, 05:22 PM
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Flash Intro...
This is my first flash intro. I might use it on my the new version of my site if it is good. It looks like 3/5 larger than it would acually be on the site:
http://www.stealthnet3000.com/D1.swf
Any comments... 
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12-10-2003, 05:25 PM
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humm seems kind of basic and pointless. But nice for a beginner.
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12-10-2003, 05:30 PM
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so i shouldnt use it?
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12-10-2003, 05:32 PM
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I say no
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12-10-2003, 05:37 PM
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I think its cool. Not that great to use as an intro but I still like it...
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12-10-2003, 05:37 PM
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Go for a new font.
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12-10-2003, 05:40 PM
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I agree it would be better if you fixed a few things, but I think it is kind of point less. If you are trying to advertise your skills as a web designer, you need to have a very advanced flash if you are going to have flash. Some people might see that and say hey, they looks like the work of a beginner. My view on web design sites, is don't make one till you know you are good. Or in your case, don't show a skill, that you don't excel in.
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12-10-2003, 05:48 PM
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ok, thanks for the advice
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12-10-2003, 06:08 PM
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good info i say practice makes you better so practice.. erm i think if the splash was minimal in design it would be good ie black on white maybe quarter page grey and make the music flow better and change the font and make it smaller
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12-11-2003, 09:25 AM
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Yeah what were all those things doing at the sides?
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12-11-2003, 02:20 PM
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Originally Posted by cardesign
Yeah what were all those things doing at the sides?
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12-11-2003, 02:30 PM
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After the Stealth Net 3000 bit it went off to the side but you could still see St
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12-11-2003, 02:35 PM
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oh, whatever
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12-11-2003, 02:36 PM
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ya u can c it.. im not too keen on the love boat music either get some phat beats dude! the font is pap.. like i said this can be good with a few things changed,
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12-11-2003, 02:37 PM
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ya, i dont think its a bad intro, but i would definitely practice some more with some different ideas, i mean what you have is ok, but its not something i would put upon intrance to a web design site.
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12-11-2003, 02:38 PM
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ok
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