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12-23-2003, 01:48 PM
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it seems like u tried to hard, maybe. Too much going on, i dont need to see it in html to comment on it, but can u make some changes to the content boxes first. and the two patterns use some inner shadows set to a lighter color or something.. instead of putting in patterns try some small details
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12-23-2003, 01:48 PM
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I like what ive done... maybe.. you can show me in paint what I can do better.. just.. dont look at the coding... just look at the design..
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Maybe... I just dont want you to repond to this thread anymore... |
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12-23-2003, 01:51 PM
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when i said where are you going to put the links, alls you had to say was in the "sections" box. Most people dont call their navigation area sections, but i guess you can if you want.
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12-23-2003, 01:53 PM
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Originally Posted by AcRoNym
it seems like u tried to hard, maybe. Too much going on, i dont need to see it in html to comment on it, but can u make some changes to the content boxes first. and the two patterns use some inner shadows set to a lighter color or something.. instead of putting in patterns try some small details
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Thats what I need help on.. what kind of patterns you think I should add? just to make it have a tad more detial.. |
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12-23-2003, 01:54 PM
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we should stop being nasty  can you make some changes techno? |
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12-23-2003, 01:56 PM
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Yes...
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12-23-2003, 01:57 PM
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try taking out the patterns first and the dark shadow on the sections box, and remove the smudged text, then i can give some ideas on details etc
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12-23-2003, 01:59 PM
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id make the top header into one piece straight across and also take out the 4 pixel stroke on the sections box.. when uve made some alteration post an update...
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12-23-2003, 02:31 PM
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i don't want either person to take this in the wrong way, but his designing honestly does remind me of stealthnet's in a way.
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12-23-2003, 02:42 PM
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Its the blue and the silver
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12-23-2003, 02:44 PM
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not just the blue and silver, i think maybe the patterned sections and the parts cut away in triangles etc.
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12-23-2003, 02:48 PM
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What Nick is trying to say is, before he starts coding the design and stuff, he wants suggestions on how to make the design better. He doesn't wanna waste time coding one thing, redoing the design, and coding again.
Got it?
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12-23-2003, 03:07 PM
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are you his mate or something? seem to know what he's thinking all the time.
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12-23-2003, 03:13 PM
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I got to his house once and a while, we know each other personally. I was there yesterday.
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12-23-2003, 04:03 PM
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Originally Posted by AcRoNym
try taking out the patterns first and the dark shadow on the sections box, and remove the smudged text, then i can give some ideas on details etc
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Like this?
I think it looks better with the patterns and the dark shadow... but, the smudged text part was a good idea to take out... I think... |
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12-23-2003, 04:05 PM
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Originally Posted by AcRoNym
id make the top header into one piece straight across and also take out the 4 pixel stroke on the sections box.. when uve made some alteration post an update...
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nah.. thats my fav part of the whole design... |
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12-23-2003, 04:34 PM
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Man ease off the gradients!!
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12-23-2003, 04:57 PM
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About this?
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12-23-2003, 05:07 PM
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take the gradients outta the boxes and you might have something at least usable. really, those gradients aren't helping you.
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12-23-2003, 05:55 PM
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Originally Posted by DaveyBoy
i don't want either person to take this in the wrong way, but his designing honestly does remind me of stealthnet's in a way.
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