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Old 01-05-2004, 02:55 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I didn't like blank red so I changed that. And I added some content things too.



O yah, I changed the copyright bar too
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Old 01-05-2004, 02:59 PM   #2 (permalink)
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the red part and the logo part are cool, but the actual content area looks really sloppy and rushed compared to it.
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Old 01-05-2004, 03:18 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Too easy!

Shadow is unnecessary.
Colors are oppressive imho.
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Old 01-05-2004, 03:21 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Too easy is what I'm aiming for, I want to get a simple but pro looking design.

I think the shadow is nice.

What do you mean by oppressive?


Thanks Davey, what parts make the content area look rushed? I think it may be the simple font that makes it look rushed, but there is still more to be added.
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Old 01-05-2004, 03:29 PM   #5 (permalink)
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yeah probably the simple font but i dunno, there's just something about the content area that doesn't seem as polished. Same as on the current live version u have.
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Old 01-05-2004, 03:31 PM   #6 (permalink)
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nice avatar davey, and nice template pimpen, the font is a little to big for the nav.
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Old 01-05-2004, 03:32 PM   #7 (permalink)
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On my current site: cause the whole content area is content, no graphics...

Well make sure to tell me the truth cause I want this to be nice. I'll change the Font to one like the header maybe.
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Old 01-05-2004, 03:33 PM   #8 (permalink)
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whats with the go button, it looks weird.
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Old 01-05-2004, 03:37 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I like that mottled wine color... looks kool imo ..
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Thanks Atom.

Stealth, thats how my windowblinds theme makes buttons, I just used a screener to see how it would look on the actual design.
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Old 01-05-2004, 07:04 PM   #11 (permalink)
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the red part and the logo part are cool, but the actual content area looks really sloppy and rushed compared to it.
exactly, and i think the shaddow looks good
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Old 01-05-2004, 07:07 PM   #12 (permalink)
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Two thumbs up IMHO. If it were me, I'd reduce the font size... but than again people tend to complain my stuff is too small, so I might not be a good person to listen to on that one.
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Old 01-05-2004, 07:07 PM   #13 (permalink)
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Looks great I would also reduce the font size.
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Thanks guys. That is why I HATE designing on my resolution, I always think it'll be too small so I make it a little bigger.

But thanks again everyone.

What do I need in the content area?
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Old 01-05-2004, 08:10 PM   #16 (permalink)
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hey thats some good thinking
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lol well um it's a design, not the actual page.... I want views on the design, the content will go in after, but I'm still workin for some boxes on that page.
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Old 01-05-2004, 08:49 PM   #18 (permalink)
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soemtimes you need to put some content in to see how the design holds up...
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Well I still need to make some boxes for the inside, for the top 10's and stuff
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nice new template pimp