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Old 01-08-2004, 12:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Lexfest 2004 - need help :)
I'm working on a flyer (and after that a website) for Lexfest 2004.

I've got something done, but i got the feeling something is missing...and with the help of all your people's graphic insight i hope to find out what .

Plz, gimmy comment and tips on how to improve this.

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Old 01-08-2004, 01:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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it looks great, but the text is out of poroprtion from the rest of the page.
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Old 01-08-2004, 01:30 PM   #3 (permalink)
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it looks great, but the text is out of poroprtion from the rest of the page.
what do you mean with out of poroprtion?
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Old 01-08-2004, 01:53 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I think it looks great.
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What is Lexfest?
small festival (with a ripp-off name )
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Old 01-08-2004, 02:16 PM   #7 (permalink)
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the size of the text is fine, but i do agree something is missing, i'll keep thinking
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mabey another lense flare up high some where

just a thought
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Very nice, I like that.
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What is Lexfest?
small festival (with a ripp-off name )
What type of festival? Like... music, or art, or ... beer? ... Are the festivities centered in a particular theme?
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It's kinda like a band - DJ - beer - having fun party
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Well..... the poster, to me, conveys "mystery" only, nothing else. If that's all you wanted it to convey then... I think you've done quite well (I'm not being sarcastic). The colors and work are very good imo.

I'm not sure exactly what kind of festival this is but, the theme of the poster seems a bit on the serious side for a festival ... and I'm finding it hard to think of suggestions for improvement because of this. To me, festivals are synonymous with fun, but the look of this poster doesn't convey this, it conveys only mystery, to me. If it was a poster for a band, it would seem more appropriate. I'm really at a loss for suggestions Inochi ...

I love that green... and the ghostly figure is very good work ... not positive that those are fingers there but, those are pretty cool too...
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it looks great, but the text is out of poroprtion from the rest of the page.
what do you mean with out of poroprtion?

like the image is really big, and the text looks sooo small. If the text is too big, it looks bad, but it is a little too small.
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haha..any more comment ?
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looks great
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like atom says it just looks mysteriously green,
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like atom says it just looks mysteriously green,
it's suppost to be mysterious
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its too mysterious for an ad for a festival i think..
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