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10-16-2003, 10:27 AM
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Fire saftey brochure
This is the header for a brochure i'm working on that will be handed out at a local KAK campsite. Any thoughts?

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10-16-2003, 10:28 AM
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10-16-2003, 10:30 AM
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John, So? What about the link....
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10-16-2003, 10:30 AM
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Ive got it posted up there, dont need a link to it.
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10-16-2003, 10:32 AM
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He's pointing out who it is
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10-16-2003, 10:32 AM
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What an interesting day here on the forum.
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10-16-2003, 10:32 AM
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Yea so anyway, about the graphic?
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10-16-2003, 10:35 AM
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Jake, why did you say "After looking at both sites and not knowing the history of either of these people.." in that other thread.
That is deceitful. Am I a total freak for disliking lies? Is lying the norm these days?
Jake, if you're going to stick around this time, be honest. Easy. Be honest. Ok?
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10-16-2003, 10:37 AM
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Gotcha, *raises right hand* i swear to be honest on the IMR forums.
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10-16-2003, 10:41 AM
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John: Ok. As you can see, I didn't read the other thread yet....
Jake: Why did you put Cleveland Ohio? You live in Toledo 
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10-16-2003, 10:42 AM
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Drop it. He swore to be honest.
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10-16-2003, 10:43 AM
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Back to the graphic:
I like it. Looks good. Have you thought about making it red?
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10-16-2003, 10:44 AM
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yah. Red would make it look a lot better. Or maybe both red and orange....
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10-16-2003, 10:44 AM
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yeah it's cool..but did he REALLY make it this time ???
lmao...sorry couldn't resist...Jake errr tigibit is a friend of mine but I couldn't resist...no more from me...I promise 
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10-16-2003, 10:47 AM
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well i didnt make the entire thing, the middle flame graphic was an outline of a flame that was on a clipart disk a i have, i just colored it in.
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10-16-2003, 10:49 AM
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Originally Posted by raciviusdawn
yeah it's cool..but did he REALLY make it this time ???
lmao...sorry couldn't resist...Jake errr tigibit is a friend of mine but I couldn't resist...no more from me...I promise 
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Hard to not laugh... 
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10-16-2003, 11:33 AM
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I think it would be cool if the text of the graphic also had the kind of little flamelets (is that a word) comming off it like the main flame itself. Maybe also work the graphic so the lighting appeared as if it was comming from the large center flame aswell.
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10-16-2003, 01:19 PM
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I think this image might be more effective. 
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10-16-2003, 01:21 PM
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Well its for campfires in the woods, so im not sure if the house would be very relevant?
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10-16-2003, 01:25 PM
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Originally Posted by tigibit
Well its for campfires in the woods, so im not sure if the house would be very relevant?
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Yeah, I guess not- it was just funny though.
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