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Old 08-24-2006, 01:10 PM   #1 (permalink)
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T-shirt critique

Someone help me out I am burned out on this local festival I have to come up with 2 more t-shirt designs before I go home tomorrow. If anyone can help give me a new direction & tell me what you think of this version.
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Old 08-24-2006, 01:14 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I think it looks hot. I love it.
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Old 08-24-2006, 02:01 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I like it, very professional and nothing lacking.
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I would put "19th annual" with the same font as Musicfest, maybe going behind the head of the top guy to integrate it better.
Theres an orange stroke on the head of the above guitarist that doesn´t convince me...but that´s looking too further maybe...
The bottom logos (music n fx and main street) should be more separated from the word Musicfest to the bottom.
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Old 08-24-2006, 02:47 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks for all the input here is design 2 which is what my boss asked for. I think I'll go throw up now.
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Old 08-24-2006, 05:21 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I liked the other much better.
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Old 08-24-2006, 06:12 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I love them both Prado, The first one is great, but in my opinion maybe less yellow on the faces? I don't know, just a suggestion. And the second is nice, but I kind of like the first one, beacuse it had more details and it did take alot of work. But both of them are trully amazing, great job on them.
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Just so every one knows how the shirts turned out. this weekend some 1500 people will be wearing my design. Kind of neat to think about
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Congrats Shelley! That's a nice T-shirt!
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Looks great, Shelley. You should stay out of the sun, though.
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Old 10-04-2006, 11:35 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Way to go Shelley

It's great when you see others wearing your tops isn't it
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The shirt looks fantastic!!!
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Wow, congratulation, I am happy for you
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I used to print shirts and design logos for them, its great when you get to see your own designs on shirts and yea i love the yellow one too Well done chickie!!
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That's rock Prado! Nice work...

Anyway,what and where is the musicfest? Is it out in the market? or just only for the show and for the participants and staff?...

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MusicFest is a local festival here in Arkansas, USA. It's not a huge deal being that it is Arkansas & one of the smaller cities with a population of around 50thou. The t-shirts were sold to the public & staff of the festival. They sold out twice & are now being printed for the third time to go in local clothing stores around town. Nothing too special but still pretty good for a white girl
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