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08-24-2006, 01:10 PM
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T-shirt critique
Someone help me out I am burned out on this local festival I have to come up with 2 more t-shirt designs before I go home tomorrow. If anyone can help give me a new direction & tell me what you think of this version.
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08-24-2006, 01:14 PM
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I think it looks hot. I love it.
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08-24-2006, 02:01 PM
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I like it, very professional and nothing lacking.
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08-24-2006, 02:24 PM
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I would put "19th annual" with the same font as Musicfest, maybe going behind the head of the top guy to integrate it better.
Theres an orange stroke on the head of the above guitarist that doesn´t convince me...but that´s looking too further maybe...
The bottom logos (music n fx and main street) should be more separated from the word Musicfest to the bottom.
Hope this may help
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08-24-2006, 02:47 PM
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Thanks for all the input here is design 2 which is what my boss asked for. I think I'll go throw up now.
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08-24-2006, 05:21 PM
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I liked the other much better.
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08-24-2006, 06:12 PM
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I love them both Prado, The first one is great, but in my opinion maybe less yellow on the faces? I don't know, just a suggestion. And the second is nice, but I kind of like the first one, beacuse it had more details and it did take alot of work. But both of them are trully amazing, great job on them. 
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10-04-2006, 09:45 AM
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Just so every one knows how the shirts turned out. this weekend some 1500 people will be wearing my design. Kind of neat to think about 
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10-04-2006, 09:48 AM
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Congrats Shelley! That's a nice T-shirt!
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10-04-2006, 11:06 AM
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Looks great, Shelley. You should stay out of the sun, though. 
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10-04-2006, 11:35 AM
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Way to go Shelley
It's great when you see others wearing your tops isn't it 
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10-04-2006, 11:40 AM
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Originally Posted by G10
It's great when you see others wearing your tops isn't it 
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Is that what you girlfriend told you? 
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10-04-2006, 12:28 PM
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The shirt looks fantastic!!!
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10-04-2006, 01:36 PM
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Wow, congratulation, I am happy for you 
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10-06-2006, 06:30 AM
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I used to print shirts and design logos for them, its great when you get to see your own designs on shirts and yea i love the yellow one too  Well done chickie!!
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10-10-2006, 09:59 AM
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That's rock Prado! Nice work...
Anyway,what and where is the musicfest? Is it out in the market? or just only for the show and for the participants and staff?...
Last edited by grazie1 : 10-10-2006 at 10:03 AM.
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10-10-2006, 01:52 PM
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MusicFest is a local festival here in Arkansas, USA. It's not a huge deal being that it is Arkansas & one of the smaller cities with a population of around 50thou. The t-shirts were sold to the public & staff of the festival. They sold out twice & are now being printed for the third time to go in local clothing stores around town. Nothing too special but still pretty good for a white girl 
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10-10-2006, 01:59 PM
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I LOVE IT! 
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10-10-2006, 02:31 PM
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I want one...
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10-10-2006, 02:58 PM
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