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01-26-2004, 12:07 PM
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First graphic as Rizande
Hey guys, i'm starting to get better at photoshop so i decided to post a little something i made today. I started out with a pic of a forest and a girl with brown eyes. Tell me what ya think  also see it here: http://www.freewebs.com/imaginethismedia/forrest.htm
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01-26-2004, 12:11 PM
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Forgotten is double T lol
Nice tho
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01-26-2004, 12:13 PM
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Forgotten is double T lol
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haha, will change. Hey i never said i could spell. Thanks.
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01-26-2004, 12:20 PM
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it wont let me upload the new one, well i'll retry when i get home. (click on link above to see revised version)
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01-26-2004, 12:25 PM
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i like it..but the green doesn't realy goes with the skin colos...
maybe you should try a different one..
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01-26-2004, 12:27 PM
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nice job, bud. Suggestions: make eyes more transparent so the edges aren't visible. Also if you change the text (forgotten beauty), ex. adding transparency and/or similar gritiness effect, it will go a long way. Other than that I like it, though!
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01-26-2004, 12:36 PM
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nice job, bud. Suggestions: make eyes more transparent so the edges aren't visible. Also if you change the text (forgotten beauty), ex. adding transparency and/or similar gritiness effect, it will go a long way. Other than that I like it, though!
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Ya thanks guys, i'll try both of those. Inochi, are you saying make the skin blend in more? I changed some stuff, check it out.
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01-26-2004, 12:38 PM
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Yes, my friend; definite improvement. Still, on the very right upper edge of the eye photo, there's still too much of a line-it should be a smooth transition.
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01-26-2004, 12:41 PM
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Yes, my friend; definite improvement. Still, on the very right upper edge of the eye photo, there's still too much of a line-it should be a smooth transition.
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Ya i see that, i erased some more, but then i realized that it was the placement of one of the brushes i used to make it look like that. I'll erase that brush so it doesn't give it that affect.
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01-26-2004, 01:46 PM
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nice... I like it... nice eye colors...
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01-26-2004, 01:50 PM
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Very intriguing. Keeps your attention.
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01-26-2004, 02:28 PM
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Thanks
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01-26-2004, 03:06 PM
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Very well done.
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