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01-29-2004, 09:40 PM
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Fatal Choices........Shattered Dreams
hey guys, theres a program at my school going on called Fatal Choices Shattered Dreams. Its a program to make kids aware of drunk driving. Its a huge setup where they set up a fake car wreck outside using real cars that were in an accident by a drunk driver where people died, then put make up on people and make it realistic and have firetrucks, ambulances, and police all come and take everyone off as if it was a real reck, and we film it and make a video, well to make a long story short i made this graphic for the program, we might us it, we still haven't figured it out yet. Tell me what you think.
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01-29-2004, 11:32 PM
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A tear down the cheek I think might be good...
maybe some redness of the white also, like there would be if the person is, or was, really crying...
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01-30-2004, 12:13 AM
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I know this isn't too relevant but... my mom was insturmental in the inception of the nationally famous "friends don't let friends drive drunk" slogan, and she is an important figure, both in her home state and nationally, in the field of alcoholism. She is responsible both solely and in part, for many important changes in our laws concerning this issue. She has met with Presidents, vice Presidents, first ladies, movie stars, famous comedians, upper law enforcement officials, famous doctors etc... and a host of very important people in the field of alcoholism and drug addiction. Sorry for this clog in your thread, I'm extremely proud of her and thought it might be an appropriate place to mention her. This is a good looking graphic and I hope they use it.. looks very good...
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01-30-2004, 07:57 AM
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Thanks atom, thats really cool what your mom does. I'm just hoping i can do my small part in this big operation to get the point across to kids through some cool graphics and photos.
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01-30-2004, 08:02 AM
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instead of a tear coming down, how bout a drop of blood?
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01-30-2004, 10:46 AM
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Ya that would be cool, like a tear of blood.
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01-30-2004, 02:20 PM
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where you get that spider web?
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01-30-2004, 02:37 PM
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i like it alot, except i would change the font, and rearange it, but good work, the image you have fadded over the eye works very well for the message your trying to convey
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01-31-2004, 02:50 AM
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Quote:
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Originally Posted by Pimpen 2010
where you get that spider web?
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That's shattered glass Pimp...
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01-31-2004, 07:26 AM
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I like it, but don't makeit too glamorous!
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