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Field of Dreams
hey guys i just finished this, tell me what u think/what u don't like
thanks in advance
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11-15-2006, 12:44 AM
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I'd get rid of the sparkle, I think it's lame.
Kind of eerie. I like it.
A bit vague though.
She has an interesting stare.
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11-15-2006, 03:51 AM
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I like it, don't like the thing on her nose though.
But it's a good image, and like Atom said it's pretty eerie.
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11-15-2006, 08:58 AM
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thanks guys, i will be removing that thing off the nose, i guess it must have been by mistake, because i don't like it either nor do i remember puting it there
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11-15-2006, 08:50 PM
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I like it. But, I have to ask, what did you use to draw it?
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11-15-2006, 10:48 PM
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it's not drawn, it is a picture of a womans face, heavely edited, and a field, i don't know if that answers ur question. did it?
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11-15-2006, 11:54 PM
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Not really..But you don't have to tell me if you don't want to, its no big deal..I still like the pic, regardless of what you used.
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11-16-2006, 12:05 AM
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no no i'd love to tell u what i did i just don't understand what ur asking. are u asking about the brushes???
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11-16-2006, 12:10 AM
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I mean the program you used...photo shop, gimp, serif?
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11-16-2006, 12:19 AM
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oh, i used photoshop, thats all i use for image manip.
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11-16-2006, 03:55 AM
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Quote:
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thanks guys, i will be removing that thing off the nose, i guess it must have been by mistake, because i don't like it either nor do i remember puting it there
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There's one below her left eye, too. Just noticed that. |
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11-17-2006, 09:21 AM
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thanks davey i took care of everything
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11-17-2006, 09:25 AM
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Calisonder, post it. Make a few other adjustments too maybe.
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11-17-2006, 09:28 AM
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is this one too dark, i realize my screen seting are very light, and i never adust my work.
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11-17-2006, 09:33 AM
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did anyone notice the wavy text that kinda looks like a strand of her hair?
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11-17-2006, 09:41 AM
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is this one too dark, i realize my screen seting are very light, and i never adust my work.
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Well, it's hard to say ..
no what I meant was build the piece .. add to it. You might not be into that though. |
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11-17-2006, 09:43 AM
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did anyone notice the wavy text that kinda looks like a strand of her hair?
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Yes I did .. Illustrator? Or is it part of a brush pattern that you distorted?
Try and figure out a way to blend the sparkles on the horizon better .. maybe even make them explosions. |
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11-17-2006, 09:51 AM
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Also, there's now a typo on it - it's 'you're' not 'your'
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11-17-2006, 10:03 AM
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