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Old 02-17-2004, 10:48 AM   #1 (permalink)
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I like it a lot.

I just don't like the text. I don't think that it blends in with the background that great.
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I like it a lot.

I just don't like the text. I don't think that it blends in with the background that great.
Funny you should mention that... that text has been bugging me for that very reason ever since I put it there... lol

I'll blend it in better... thanx Dist...
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Old 02-18-2004, 12:43 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I like it a lot.

I just don't like the text. I don't think that it blends in with the background that great.
How's that, better? Or should I keep messing with it...
.. maybe take the flames out?
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I think that it does look a lot better now.

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Yeah, I think that it will make it look a lot better. I think that the flames are a bit overkill.
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its nice, but 2 things to consider.

firstly, that tree or whatever it is in the background is appawling, rid your good pic of it

secondly, the tree in the foreground should be darker. from the angle you are looking at it the raven is completely in the shade. why isnt the tree in shade then?

you have to keep those things in mind whilst trying to do shadows

good work tho, perhaps a bit plain
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I think that it does look a lot better now.

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Yeah, I think that it will make it look a lot better. I think that the flames are a bit overkill.
Ok I'll ditch them ... thanx man..
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its nice, but 2 things to consider.

firstly, that tree or whatever it is in the background is appawling, rid your good pic of it

secondly, the tree in the foreground should be darker. from the angle you are looking at it the raven is completely in the shade. why isnt the tree in shade then?

you have to keep those things in mind whilst trying to do shadows

good work tho, perhaps a bit plain
Ok... I am going to take all your advice and see how it looks... Thanx COF ...
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Thanx LOM.. now if I could just learn to make a decent website ....

I'm learning pretty slowly but... I "am" learning .... thanx to the active members here..
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