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02-19-2004, 02:43 PM
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This Pain is Just to Real...................................
I'm pretty happy with how this turned out, it's one of my best pieces....
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02-19-2004, 03:06 PM
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once again, i know where your inspiration and style came from...and don't deny it either
Either way, it's nice!
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02-19-2004, 03:07 PM
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lol oh and you spelt 'too' wrongly, easily correctly though luckily
I like the way they are stitched together.
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02-19-2004, 03:10 PM
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Originally Posted by DaveyBoy
once again, i know where your inspiration and style came from...and don't deny it either
Either way, it's nice!
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omg wtf, everytime i put a screw in an arm, or a head, or something else, you tell me i stole lombi's style, wtf, there is so much artwork all over the net that has screws and nail's and what not, please explain what u are talking about, thanks....
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02-19-2004, 03:23 PM
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cos you'd never done it before his work came about i guess. I know there is, it just seemed you do this after he came here - the whole strychnine thing n all.
I ain't knocking your work, cos i couldn't do it - at all. I just think that it looks too much in that style - all the writing etc over the top, basically if it had been anonymously posted here everyone would think it was his work. Like if juggo posts something, you can tell it's his.
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02-19-2004, 03:36 PM
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Not my favorite type of art.... kinda gory ... but nice work non the less...
The orange color on the hands seems a bit of a peculiar shade... I can't help thinking that some of the darkest orange might look better in a shade of red, but, not sure though.
..yes I think this is prob. your best piece in this category... again... nice work 05..
oh yeah... fix that spelling.. :wink:
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02-19-2004, 04:32 PM
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I like it but looks like some other work I've seen from an artist called Lombi, you made a spelling mistake too.
Regardless nice work, but too much use of the burn tool in odd places then light in others.
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02-19-2004, 04:46 PM
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webmaster05 ..... I've been studying your stiches on this pic. and conferring with others about them..........
You need to either get permission to use someone elses image/s, or at least "state that you used" someone elses image/s, in your compositions, when you do so. This is really important. You haven't done either here 05 .... I'm pretty disappointed... 
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02-19-2004, 04:47 PM
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is it...all...too real? you know, i hope you have the psd saved so you can change that major typo. Yeah it's really demented, but your skills are excellent. end.
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02-19-2004, 05:06 PM
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I love it!
I agree, looks like Lombi's work (take it as a compliment, nothing wrong trying out someones style)
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02-19-2004, 05:17 PM
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cool
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02-19-2004, 05:50 PM
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first, i've decided to keep the to spelled wrong because i unintentially always spell stuff wrong in my art, i'ts kinda a trade mark i guess, and plus i'm to lazy to go and fix it
second, davey boy i understand why you think what u do about my "insperation" for my work, yes i'm sure some of my insperation has come from him, because i have gotten insperation from every artists that i have seen in my life, and i didn't start making stuff like that before lombi came here because i couldon't. It's that simple. I didn't have the skills. Inochi, was the bigist reason i started to get better, seing how awsome he is inspired me to work hard at it, and get better. FOR THE MOST PART, LOMBI'S WORK IS NOT UNIQUE, THEIR ARE HUNDREDS OF OTHER ARTISTS THAT HAVE THE EXACT SAME STYLE. I'm not trying to take away how awsome he is, i'm just trying to convey the message that I didn't steal his "style".
wo, i know i sound like i'm going on a mad rave here, i'm just calmly trying to get my point across
third, atom, who have you been confering with about the use of those stiches without giving credit being wrong. I'ts a picture of somebodys busted up leg. Big deal. just incase anybody's wondering, i got them off of a tutorial a long time ago that gave a downloadable zip file with all the materials used. And you being disapointed in me. What the f is that about. The pic is in the open domain. I't just a picture of stiches. Your making it sound like i grabed somebody's artwork off the net and slapped my name on it. This is not a serious matter. Your telling me to slap a red sticker on the bottem of my piece that says "note to all, i did not actually take the picture of the stiches used in the piece my self" Come on now. If i use a picture of a sea shell in my art, put a disclaimer that i do not own the sea shell. Seriously.
i know i sound pissed off, i'm really not, i'm just a little adjatated, and would apricate a resonce from atom and davey boy, no hard fillings....
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02-19-2004, 05:53 PM
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Originally Posted by Elysium
Regardless nice work, but too much use of the burn tool in odd places then light in others.
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where do you mean, i'm not saying your wrong, i just want to get better, i know up in the upper right there are some unnessary shaddow's, is that where your talking about, thanks.....
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02-19-2004, 06:38 PM
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Originally Posted by webmaster05
first, i've decided to keep the to spelled wrong because i unintentially always spell stuff wrong in my art, i'ts kinda a trade mark i guess, and plus i'm to lazy to go and fix it
second, davey boy i understand why you think what u do about my "insperation" for my work, yes i'm sure some of my insperation has come from him, because i have gotten insperation from every artists that i have seen in my life, and i didn't start making stuff like that before lombi came here because i couldon't. It's that simple. I didn't have the skills. Inochi, was the bigist reason i started to get better, seing how awsome he is inspired me to work hard at it, and get better. FOR THE MOST PART, LOMBI'S WORK IS NOT UNIQUE, THEIR ARE HUNDREDS OF OTHER ARTISTS THAT HAVE THE EXACT SAME STYLE. I'm not trying to take away how awsome he is, i'm just trying to convey the message that I didn't steal his "style".
wo, i know i sound like i'm going on a mad rave here, i'm just calmly trying to get my point across
third, atom, who have you been confering with about the use of those stiches without giving credit being wrong. I'ts a picture of somebodys busted up leg. Big deal. just incase anybody's wondering, i got them off of a tutorial a long time ago that gave a downloadable zip file with all the materials used. And you being disapointed in me. What the f is that about. The pic is in the open domain. I't just a picture of stiches. Your making it sound like i grabed somebody's pic of the net and slapped my name on it. This is not a serious matter. Your telling me to slap a red sticker on the bottem of my piece that says "note to all, i did not actually take the picture of the stiches used in the piece my self" Come on now. If i use a picture of a sea shell in my art, but a disclaimer that i do not own the sea shell. Seriously.
i know i sound pissed off, i'm really not, i'm just a little adjatated, and would apricate a resonce from atom and davey boy, no hard fillings....[/b]
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That's soo hard to understand, it warrants a translator, dude use a spell checker. I was talking about the random use of the burn tool. It doesn't look right.
Is there a spell check on here?
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02-19-2004, 06:47 PM
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no i wish there was, i know i can't spell, i know u were talking about the random ness of the burn tool, but where specificly, i really want to know, so i can get better
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02-19-2004, 06:55 PM
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Yeah a spell checker would be good on here, due to the fact the internet in general makes people lazy at spelling and grammar, but I think there is too much burn tool around the wrist and palm, unless you're trying to represent soot or smoke damage IMO. Look near the stitch and it's clean looking for a wound, then goes black again.
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02-19-2004, 08:02 PM
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thanks, i got lazy their, i shouldon't have burned around that area at all
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02-19-2004, 08:14 PM
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Who the hell cares about spelling on a forum? If I had to go back and correct my spelling on my posts, I'd be editing posts for a week.
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02-19-2004, 08:20 PM
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everyone needs to calm down.... and if you need anymore pictures of stitches.. I have a picture of my arm that has stitches in it. A piece of glass went through my arm... it was pretty cool.. 
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02-19-2004, 08:23 PM
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