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02-27-2004, 03:24 PM
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Leon's Web Design Center - Flash Edition
http://legendaryfrog.com/leon/test.htm
This is STRICTLY Business, my personal will have a subdomain but will not be acessable from that site. This is my FIRST attempt to make a flash website. Right now I'm working on how I should do the Content (there are many ways to do it). But thats the basic template.
*Updates Page* Okay I've finished the About part of the flash site. I want you to keep in mind that the buttons, though the rollovers and push part still work, the actual linking doesn't.
But it has a new red tone along with a redone logo.
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02-27-2004, 03:29 PM
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Re: Leon's Web Design Center - Flash Edition
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Originally Posted by Leon
http://legendaryfrog.com/leon/test.htm
This is STRICTLY Business, my personal will have a subdomain but will not be acessable from that site. This is my FIRST attempt to make a flash website. Right now I'm working on how I should do the Content (there are many ways to do it). But thats the basic template.
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no color? |
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02-27-2004, 03:31 PM
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Re: Leon's Web Design Center - Flash Edition
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Originally Posted by Leon
http://legendaryfrog.com/leon/test.htm
This is STRICTLY Business, my personal will have a subdomain but will not be acessable from that site. This is my FIRST attempt to make a flash website. Right now I'm working on how I should do the Content (there are many ways to do it). But thats the basic template.
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Nope, not this time. |
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02-27-2004, 03:37 PM
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nice layout, not cluttered, well done. will look nicer when colored.
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02-27-2004, 03:53 PM
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Getting better!
I would recommend some color, no color is too cold and may drive some people away
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02-27-2004, 03:56 PM
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What do you suggest? I was thinking of a sort of Bluish tone.
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02-27-2004, 04:05 PM
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Blue is too common. Look at posters to get color ideas, I do that a lot. There's this really nice poster at school with a darkish red and beige color, looks really nice, a little like IMR without the extra colors
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02-27-2004, 06:08 PM
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*Updates Page* Okay I've finished the About part of the flash site. I want you to keep in mind that the buttons, though the rollovers and push part still work, the actual linking doesn't.
But it has a new red tone along with a redone logo.
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02-27-2004, 06:35 PM
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Lookin better. Maybe add a stroke around the content box and take out the scan lines that are in the content area so it's easy to read
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02-28-2004, 12:15 AM
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I like it, but I think that you should make the text in the content area selectable.  |
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02-28-2004, 01:55 AM
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imo it is too small, perhaps make it a bit bigger. I'm also not a big fan of the font and the background in the text area makes it quite hard to read when you have just woken up.
Other than that it is good.  |
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02-28-2004, 09:59 AM
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lol.. i agree with Ed, but it does look great.
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02-28-2004, 11:07 AM
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Although it's small, its not centering in the middle (V and H) like it's suppose to. And if your reading it when u've just woken up, your looking at it for it's real purpose  .  |
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02-28-2004, 03:32 PM
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it just looks so ordinary and plain, it looks exactly like all of your other sites, try to be creative and think outside of the box, in the web design industry, people are going to request services for the most part from the people that have the best site, along with a few other things, like cradentials, past work, etc. It is just to boring.
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02-28-2004, 03:53 PM
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Its way too small as others have said. And its also too plain as Calisonder said. Try and make it have more special features, make it stand out more
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