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Hmm more from me
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03-01-2004, 04:08 PM
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nicely done. I like it.. not sure about the text.. perhaps a more 3dimensional? Regardless 9/10
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03-01-2004, 04:11 PM
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Thats pretty cool, nice and creative. Although the edges are a little pixelated?
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03-01-2004, 04:12 PM
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the jagged ones? their supposed to be like that
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03-01-2004, 04:12 PM
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I thought that was deliberate and really liked it.
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03-01-2004, 04:13 PM
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This is great Spear,,, I really like it...
I would try lightening the shadow considerably and see how it looks,,, also I would try lightening the black areas inside the ball a bit, make it look more like chunks are missing... you might try a filter or layer style to do that though... just see how it looks
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03-01-2004, 04:19 PM
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Very nice, Spear  |
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03-01-2004, 04:23 PM
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I like it buddy. Looks great to me. |
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03-01-2004, 04:24 PM
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I dunno, it looks weird, you can see these black dots and stuff? |
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03-01-2004, 04:26 PM
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that is the part that adds alot of flavor. But thats just my 2cents.
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03-01-2004, 04:27 PM
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If you apply the right filter/s or layer style/s... you can make the black dots look like pits... same w/the missing chunks.. give them more definition ... but you may have to lighten the black up some first... not sure...
filter/textures might be the key .... just have to play around ... looks good though the way it is too ... these are just suggestions for possible improvement...
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03-01-2004, 07:52 PM
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better?
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03-01-2004, 07:54 PM
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Wow, that rocks |
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03-01-2004, 08:06 PM
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Yeah.... looks kool... I really like it... nice work, Spear ... |
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03-01-2004, 09:01 PM
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your gettin alot better
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03-02-2004, 04:02 PM
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03-02-2004, 04:12 PM
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That's cool! |
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03-02-2004, 04:17 PM
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i like that one to spear. 9/10.
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03-02-2004, 04:39 PM
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You're getting much much better spear. The last few graphics you've shown show a great improvement.
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03-02-2004, 04:41 PM
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i spent like entire weekend working with tutorials..
just incase anyone is wondering: yeah, some aspects are from tutorials.. but their not the same.. like first one.. it didnt have spiral effect.. it was just a circle.. i cut edges and stuff and added coloring.. 2nd one was mainly my own stuff
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