Medical Brochure (Re-designed)

[jani]

I received a medical brochure in my company.. I didn't like the overall appearance of that brochure so I decided to re-make it.

See the original brochure here

and here is my designed brochure please see both the brochures and give me comments about my design.

[chicgeek]

I'm glad you simplified the colour palette from the original design, but to me your choice of tan and orange is a little blah. Is there a reason to use these colours, or could you perhaps use a more professional tone like navy or rich green?

Overwhlemingly my biggest problem is the overuse of CAPITAL LETTERS. Maybe consider using this technique only once or twice in the design.

[jani]

Thank you Chicgeek,

I just used this dark Tan colors.. there was no particular reason, but if you say I will try to use other colors and will show you

and for the capital letters, actually I don't think they are looking bad... are they really looking that bad??

The main reason of this Re-make was to make the text readable and the proper appearance of text.

[Foxtrck]

I could agree with chicgeek about the capital letters. Looks a bit unprofessional. It looks better with the dark tan colours rather than some weird purple pattern.

[chicgeek]

More saturated colours tend to lend to a professional design easier. (I'm not saying light and pastel colours automatically look unprofessional, it's just harder).

[tresmom]

I think your design looks much better. I agree with changing at least some of the capital letters. I think having it all in caps is just a little much.