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03-21-2004, 11:27 AM
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HypnoTRANCE Final Version
I have been working hard on finding people on who wants to help me with tutorials, tracks, radio etc.. and so far its going 100% perfect. Now, hear is the final version I will use.
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03-21-2004, 12:24 PM
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your header needs a bit of work, other than that, site looks good. spice that header up with a wicked logo, maybe some descriptive text a background graphic maybe? just something to it doesnt look so bland up there.
by the way, im available for logo design  |
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03-21-2004, 12:26 PM
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umm, what kind of things you got in mind?
thanks
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03-21-2004, 06:20 PM
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or show me what you got.
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03-21-2004, 08:02 PM
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Looks nice. Don't know if you need the extra boxes at the bottom. Get a logo too
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03-21-2004, 08:04 PM
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that is my logo...
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03-21-2004, 08:34 PM
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glad to see u back
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03-21-2004, 08:49 PM
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me? lol, thanks man.. made me smile!
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03-21-2004, 08:55 PM
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Make some symbol or something...
Nick, this is the dude I told you was asking about you...
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03-21-2004, 09:25 PM
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Nick, I typed in hypnotrance.com in a browser, and some psych dude's site came up...  |
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03-21-2004, 11:23 PM
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Blue in the foot doesn't goes.
Glow of the headphones doesn't looks pretty, even in the other way.
The font in the top doesn't goes here.
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03-22-2004, 12:18 AM
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Atom, I checked it too. some hypnotists website.
Michael Djavahery, Ph.D.
Speaker, Advanced Instructor of Hypnosis
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03-22-2004, 10:57 AM
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it does not look like the name is copyrighted. umm, ile check into that. The reason why the girl has a headphone glow is couse it was so hard cutting it. im thinking about changing that now that i think about it.
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03-22-2004, 02:30 PM
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Originally Posted by TechnoSpeeder
it does not look like the name is copyrighted. umm, ile check into that. The reason why the girl has a headphone glow is couse it was so hard cutting it. im thinking about changing that now that i think about it.
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Yeah well... all you have to do if need be, is make it a subdomain.
There wasn't a glow like that when I cut it .... did you re-cut it or add an effect or something? Or maybe it's just the dark background or something... dunno.... looks ok to me though. |
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03-22-2004, 02:37 PM
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yes you did cut it, I dont know why it has that, it does look fine to me as well, seems like that one guy doesint like it tho.. ile see what I can do or whats the problem.
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03-22-2004, 02:47 PM
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Want me to fix it for you, Nick? I have the orig.
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03-22-2004, 02:50 PM
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sure, if you like! nick4real@sbcglobal.net
ic what ive done now, you have sent me the orig and ive noticed that it had that transp.. jaggy things around it, so thats why I added that glow. |
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03-22-2004, 02:57 PM
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ok I've removed the glow.... I'll send it ..... lemme know if it's ok...
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03-22-2004, 03:14 PM
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Nick.... it would be a lot easier for you to just turn off the glow.. do you still have the psd?
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03-22-2004, 03:16 PM
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yes, but it looks very jaggy from the cutting, the glow looks better with it anyway... i was playing around, maybe | |
