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03-27-2004, 09:28 AM
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Template 6
I don't know how many templates I've made previously so I call this template 6.
Tell me where you think it can be improved
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03-27-2004, 09:31 AM
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Does it look better with this change?
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03-27-2004, 09:34 AM
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yeqah the second looks better with the orange bar under the 'Navigation' title.
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03-27-2004, 09:42 AM
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03-27-2004, 10:31 AM
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looks pretty good
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03-27-2004, 12:13 PM
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Not bad
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03-27-2004, 12:27 PM
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any enhancements, that any of you think should be made?
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03-27-2004, 12:38 PM
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It looks kind of unbalanced, try putting a gray like on the right and left side of the site (so it is like a box).
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03-27-2004, 12:47 PM
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re : the above suggestion...
No way, the open sites are great, i love that kind of design. Doesn't look unbalanced at all to me!
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03-27-2004, 12:49 PM
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03-27-2004, 12:53 PM
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What font is that, for the content?
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03-27-2004, 12:54 PM
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Arial
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03-27-2004, 12:57 PM
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i agree that there's an inbalance, i don't think that putting a gray area on the right will work for the design though. maybe you can adjust the size of the image on the top right to compensate for the dominant visual weight on the left.
just a suggestion ...
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03-27-2004, 01:01 PM
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I am guessing it will look a lot different when put into html. This is just a graphic so it is 750x500 in size and in html there will be a lot of room for adjusting weight etc.
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03-28-2004, 01:15 AM
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If anybody wants to buy it they can. I need at least $80 in my PayPal account fairly quick. |
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03-28-2004, 02:29 AM
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what language is that?
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03-28-2004, 03:10 AM
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03-28-2004, 08:13 AM
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I don't like it.
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03-28-2004, 08:27 AM
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give him some reasons why not, don't just say you don't like it.
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03-28-2004, 08:40 AM
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yup, exactly. I'd love to make you like it, but it is hard when I don't know what to do.
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