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04-06-2004, 01:22 PM
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04-06-2004, 02:22 PM
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For the most part, Good. But i think the colors clash and don't really go togeather. Try to stick to one color scheme. I see a rainbow. plus, the streaks in the background dont look so good, Just make it solid with the faces. You might want to experiment with more text too. Send me the picture with just the main girl and the two in the background so i can play around with it.
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04-06-2004, 02:32 PM
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looks pretty good but most of the stuff you've showed me has had that wave effect thingy on it...
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04-06-2004, 03:08 PM
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like UbErNoOber said, the colors to seem to merge, so i would do something about that, mabey a bright yellow, but the placement of the girl, and the faded girls in the bg are perfect, and you can't go wrong with puting a smokin hot girl in an image, man she's hot
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04-06-2004, 04:00 PM
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Originally Posted by UbErNoOber_GraphicDesigns
For the most part, Good. But i think the colors clash and don't really go togeather. Try to stick to one color scheme. I see a rainbow. plus, the streaks in the background dont look so good, Just make it solid with the faces. You might want to experiment with more text too. Send me the picture with just the main girl and the two in the background so i can play around with it.
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here you go...
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04-06-2004, 05:00 PM
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Thanks, I will get to that tommorow, Im really busey tonight, Guitar/Band practice...
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04-06-2004, 05:02 PM
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I like it. I like the mix of colors. The only thing I don't like is the text. Looks too white to me.
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04-07-2004, 10:10 AM
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I'd hit it.
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04-07-2004, 11:27 AM
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i agree w/ jazzee, too white (text)
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04-08-2004, 12:30 AM
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It looks like talent to me, good job. As far as the font color????
Everything else darker, try something with black text and maybe a small barely there glow or something?
Just a thought.
Robyn
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04-08-2004, 11:05 AM
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WHITE POWER!! lol j/k
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04-08-2004, 11:34 AM
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Ok, i sorted the levels out on the pic to make the colours look good, and then added some text:
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04-08-2004, 10:54 PM
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btw, the reason i took the box out couse there was some nude showing.
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04-09-2004, 12:06 AM
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Originally Posted by TechnoSpeeder
btw, the reason i took the box out couse there was some nude showing.
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Bless you my son... 
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04-09-2004, 05:40 AM
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Originally Posted by TechnoSpeeder
btw, the reason i took the box out couse there was some nude showing.
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I airbrushed it out.... now just shows skin... no nipple etc,
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06-17-2004, 08:57 AM
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Astonishing work... Mind you give some tutorials tips to me.. I can really use them....
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