Girl & Birds

TechSup · 01-08-2008, 09:04 PM

Very nice portrait!

Well done

ram035 · 01-09-2008, 12:13 AM

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Originally Posted by Steven Myers

Very nice portrait!

Well done

Thanks Mr. Myers!

superboysahil · 01-09-2008, 01:49 AM

eXweso · 01-09-2008, 10:50 AM

Hey nice creativity there. Modern art! I don't understand the paintings but they look beautiful

Well done!

ram035 · 01-09-2008, 12:04 PM

Thanks ppl!
I don´t understand them either

jbladeus · 01-13-2008, 02:49 AM

I understood everything, but one look at that tight lil behind and i forgot what it was.

Costin Trifan · 01-13-2008, 06:50 PM

I like the girl! Is she real?

Atom · 01-14-2008, 12:25 PM

Interesting.

I would be tempted to bring out some small details in the brown glob, or possibly large ones. Transform the pixels in subtle ways at first. Sometimes you hit gold.

mit · 01-15-2008, 03:17 AM

hmmmmmm

I like it.

Adam Za7 · 01-15-2008, 03:58 AM

I like the simplicity of the pictures mixed with the texture infusion above the birds. Nice.

Atom · 01-15-2008, 01:55 PM

In all honesty, I find the abstract piece to be unpleasantly out of place in the pic, and therefore my suggestion to, I used the word transform, but I'll use a different word now, alter the pixels to enhance details and blend the abstract element to the entire piece better. The gold I refer to possibly hitting, is dependent on the degree of awesomeness of the transformation/creation within, or transformation of the glob. I've found that often the best subtle transformation tools, that can ultimately blend the piece as well, are usually PS default tools, but speaking personally, I find myself increasingly needing to employ the services of a plugin or two or three to achieve certain effects to suit my taste.

Costin Trifan · 01-15-2008, 05:56 PM

you know Atom, you're somehow a very hard to please man

Atom · 01-15-2008, 07:35 PM

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Originally Posted by Costin Trifan

you know Atom, you're somehow a very hard to please man

The piece mixes apples and oranges. The abstract element in itself is of marginal interest at best, IMO, and actually, it's mediocrity lends a cheapening effect to the piece as a whole, again IMO. Also of interest I think, is the fact that this perceived flaw of mine not only could be easily remedied with PS default tools, as stated above, but with a good possibility of a serious advance toward that elusive realm of awesome as well. This is the kind of feedback that I think, and would hope that accomplished artists could use.

ram035 · 01-15-2008, 07:52 PM

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Originally Posted by Atom

The piece mixes apples and oranges. The abstract element in itself is of marginal interest at best, IMO, and actually, it's mediocrity lends a cheapening effect to the piece as a whole, again IMO. Also of interest I think, is the fact that this perceived flaw of mine not only could be easily remedied with PS default tools, as stated above, but with a good possibility of a serious advance toward that elusive realm of awesome as well. This is the kind of feedback that I think, and would hope that accomplished artists could use.

Wow man, i can´t wait to see your work is there any to show??

Atom · 01-15-2008, 07:59 PM

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Originally Posted by ram035

Wow man, i can´t wait to see your work is there any to show??

No, but I'd be happy to fix that for you, and I won't need the PSD.

The pen work is nice.

Were those birds created from the brown glob, by any chance?

ram035 · 01-15-2008, 09:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Atom

The pen work is nice.

Thank you!

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Originally Posted by Atom

Were those birds created from the brown glob, by any chance?

Mmmmm...not sure of the question?? But probably the answer is no.

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Originally Posted by Atom

No, but I'd be happy to fix that for you, and I won't need the PSD.

Oh sorry, you can´t touch my work if im not sure of your skills to do that. Anyway, if you were Salvador Dalí probably I wouldn´t let you modify it, nothing says it is "wrong" as it is right now that´s the most interesting thing of art, and I insist wanna see more from you sometime to know from who comes this criticism and what kind of taste you got. Cheers!

Atom · 01-15-2008, 10:11 PM

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Originally Posted by ram035

Oh sorry, you can´t touch my work if im not sure of your skills to do that. Anyway, if you were Salvador Dalí I wouldn´t let you touch it, nothing says it is "wrong" as it is right now that´s the most interesting thing of art, and I insist wanna see more from you sometime to know from who comes this sort of criticism and what kind of taste you got. Cheers!

I don't care for Dali's work.

These are the last things that I created: