If you could change this logo. - Page 2

zeruel · 05-28-2008, 07:45 AM

I saw it now... Great work there Donkey. But the bird doesn't seem very detailed and the branch doesn't look good with the color same with black. I think you might want to try Skinny's suggestion...

raven1083 · 05-30-2008, 09:18 AM

looks pretty nice for me i think i wouldn't change anything keep it that way it looks professional.

jhuynh1026 · 05-30-2008, 03:33 PM

it looks pretty decent...but i would change it so i can look more alive or maybe popped up! liek a 3d look would be kewl

Donkey · 05-30-2008, 04:07 PM

Thank you all!

I truly appreciate all your input, and your time. Nothing is better than constructive critisism when you try to learn something new.

alouette · 06-01-2008, 10:36 PM

Your "boid" needs personality. The word Sparrow is now associated with Johnny Depp's characterization of Sparrow. I created a "boid" too and called it Mr Chickadee. I also use him as my avatar so you can see what his face looks like. I put a little hat on his head with a feather in his hat.

All in all, your logo is nice as black and simple, but, it is not catchy and that is what you want, a logo that grabs attention.

Donkey · 06-02-2008, 02:21 AM

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Originally Posted by alouette

Your "boid" needs personality. The word Sparrow is now associated with Johnny Depp's characterization of Sparrow. I created a "boid" too and called it Mr Chickadee. I also use him as my avatar so you can see what his face looks like. I put a little hat on his head with a feather in his hat.

All in all, your logo is nice as black and simple, but, it is not catchy and that is what you want, a logo that grabs attention.

Not sure i agree with you about that. But thanks for you input.

Personally i think that if you wanna give a serious impression giving it a comic type of element would not benefit the logo, atleast not in this case.

As for the word sparrow being associated with Johnny depp, i disagree about that one too. But once again, thank you for your input.