MikePham:
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please show me the error in my article so that I can make good in the next one
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Oh, good grief; I'll be here all night. What's in it for me? :-)
(BTW, your English is *excellent*; your article nevertheless contains some serious gaffes.) (FWIW, I can't write a lick of Vietnamese.)
The entire first paragraph, while not grammatically incorrect, could simply be stated better.
This is way wrong:
Well preparation before your submission. Better would be "Prepare well before submitting." Even better: "Preparation is key."
gather all the information which is required by most submission sites including: That colon (:) shouldn't be there.
but when they need, should be "but if they do,"
Just replace some words by synonyms then you will have an identical article with readers but different one with search engines should be "Replace some words with synonyms and rephrase sentence clauses; you'll then have articles with identical meaning for readers but different content for the search engines."
Making your resource box effective should be "Make your resource box effective," or better, "Make effective use of your resource box."
This is the first reason of writing the article should be "This is the main reason for writing the article."
include the most important information - : That should end with a colon (:) and not a dash, as a list follows it.
you must accept the policy of article directories, do not overuse or abuse with your resource box. These are two sentences and so should either be separated by a period or else a semi-colon (;). Since they're colosey related, I'd go with the latter.
Using clear format for your article when submitting should be "Format your article clearly when submitting." Hmmmm; I'm not sure that's what you mean because of the sentence which follows:
Write an article as simple as possible with a clear structure. It would seem you're talking about the structure of the article itself (ie, opening with a premise, supporting the premise, thend ending with a conclusion), but then you go on to disucss HTML, so now I'm confused and not entirely sure what it is you're saying, so I'm at a loss as to how to suggest you fix it.
Make certain to well check: Simply "Check," or to hammer the point home, "Check and double-check." "Well-check" doesn't exist in English.
Besides, pay attention to your headline should be "Moreover, pay attention to your headline" or better, "Most importantly, pay attention to your headline."
you should highlight a problem or state a solution that your readers are looking for: Not every article is about a problem, but if you wanna go this way, perhaps a better way to state it is "Promise a solution to a problem."
There are thousands of article directory on the Internet should be "There are thousands of article directories on the Internet."
Ooops:
So the more directories you submit your article to, the more backlinks you can get: I'd put a comma after the previous sentence, and attach this one to it. This is really the latter half of the previous sentence.
It's better if you have prepared a list of all article directories appropriate to your article. should be "Prepare a list of all article directories appropriate for your article." (You might extend this to say "Don't submit your article about acne to an automotive directory" by way of example.)
you can find on search engines thousands of article directories welcoming you to submit your own articles should be "you can find on search engines thousands of article directories where you can submit your articles."
On the Internet, besides of big articles directories, there are a lot of small directories which you cannot find out with the above popular keywords should be "Besides the big articles directories, there are a lot of small directories which you won't find with the above popular keywords."
Most of them are based on the same software such as Article Dashboard, Article Beach,... so with the keyword "Powered by Article Dashboard" should be "Most of them are based on the same software such as Article Dashboard or Article Beach, so with the keywords "Powered by Article Dashboard."
Checking your article's exposure and maintaining your list of article directories for the next submission should be "Check your article's exposure and maintain your list of article directories for the next submission."
You can check by either using search tools (if exists) on article directory or using quick indexing and updating search engines such as MSN should be "You can check by either using the search tools (if it exists) on the article directory to which you submitted, or using search engines which index and update quickly like MSN." (I think, if I understood the sentence.)
I've provided you with some basic but effective tips to come along your article marketing campaigns should be "I've provided you with some basic but effective tips to to help you with your article marketing campaigns."
Article writing and submission bring benefits to all authors: Consider a half paragraph explaining. Write as if the reader has no clue what article submisions can do for him. You refer to backlinks in your article, but not everyone knows what backlinks are or why they're desirable.
If your articles are not written, and submitted effectively, plenty of efforts can be wasted. should be "If your articles are not well-written and submitted effectively, you won't derive the maximum benefit from article submission."
Whew; mightta been quicker just to rewrite it, trying to type in this six-line-high box!
Good luck!