I have been reading furiously on here today - and asking rather a lot fo daft questions too

please admire me for asking the questions that no one else dare ask
Anyway, i have been thinking about my home page and before i go and do anything drastic like deleting half the text i wanted to ask you all what you thought.
I can't add my url so i will cut and paste and *** out the company name and then hopefully i will remain within the forum rules.
Using the power of Nature and the strength of traditional methods, ****** ******* provides easy alternatives to cleaning with chemicals. Green cleaning supplies offered in bulk to save time and money and regular quantities for those new to greener living.
Natural cleaning ingredients, White Vinegar, Bicarbonate of Soda, Borax, Essential Oils, Soapnuts and Dr. Bronner are easy to use and effective. Our green cleaning range offers a range of bulk ingredients for you to make your own natural and environmentally friendly cleaning products, toiletries and cosmetics. Remaining traditional, our range of craft, knitting and sewing items are designed to encourage alternatives to modern day activities and promote gift making.
This has been almost the same for the last 18 months, i have changed it slightly from time to time though.
Is it all wrong - do i need to get rid of the bottom paragraph?
Also since google refused to come into my site i am noticing that my home page is no longer visible when i do a search on the SE - i just did a google UK search and it was the Dot.com url that showed up not the .co.uk - i have never seen th .com one before. Tis a worry that my home page is dropping off of the google SE - it has always been top of page one.
Any opinions and advice appreciated. I am wanting to delete the last paragraph as i said before but didn't want to go do it and then someone say that actually it looks ok.
Thank you
anne