Need Help Weird Stuff with Google

[watex]

OK, this is the main keyword Im competing over 'club penguin cheats'

Search that on Google first and look at what you come up with.

Im placed fourth.

The person whos first. He didn't do any link exchanges, but people linked to him. His name is paintboy100. He has about 500+ links to his site. He has over 7 million visits because so many people find out about his site by typing those three keywords in. He did nothing but start 3-4 months earlier than me, and post on his blog. He was the first blog owner for the game Club Penguin. his site is paintboy100.wordpress.com As for google toolbar page rank he has a 4/10

Second up is chewittt.wordpress.com placed second he has less links to his site than i have to mine but he is higher than me! his google rank is also a 4. he also does not really do link exchange. but he posts much more than paintboy100 and thats all he does. he started 2-3 months before me.

third up is club penguin gang. clubpenguingang.com has no links to him, excluding several blog catalogs and stuff. dont know why he is so high. he started most likely after me. i dont get why he is listed so high. google rank 0/10

fourth up is me. watex.wordpress.com i asked soooo many cp blog owners to add me to their blogroll. i dont add a lot of people myself otherwise i'd have a huge blogroll listing a hundred names and my fans would leave me and go to the other sites! i have a google rank of 3/10 y is it lower than theirs and y am i fourth?!? i submit my site to soooo many blog catalogs and blog lists. do you see the blog lists on the sidebar of my site? those are the ones that require i link back to them. i dont get y im fourth!

then theres about a few hundred thousands following.

WHAT DO I DO AND WHAT AM I DOING WRONG!?!?

[Alfredito]

Maybe google think you stole his design(the first one)? im sure you notice that they are 100% the same... or maybe im wrong and many more ppl are using the same design?

Beside that, dont give up, google changes all the time, if your site will be stronger, you will get the 1st position for sure...

[Trapped]

Well #1 and #2 have definitively a better title than yours (especially #2). The weight and the density of the keywords in title of those sites is superior to yours, #3 tho doesn't have a title which we would call seo but what he has more than your site is the keyword density within the body.

If you would to increase just a little bit the keyword density within your content and change the title from Club Penguin Cheats/Tips/Help to Club Penguin Cheats | Tips | Help and install the all in one seo pack to be able to write a description too with your keywords included (and possible as first 3 words of the description), you can beat you can climb higher in the serps.

All these info I took from a simple view, did not used any tool to check the percentage of keywords etc. so I might be slightly wrong. I could of point to some of my URLs which could turn useful to you but i can't (rules of V7N, can't point links to own site).

Hope this helps to penguin you in the #1

[watex]

Originally Posted by Trapped

Well #1 and #2 have definitively a better title than yours (especially #2). The weight and the density of the keywords in title of those sites is superior to yours, #3 tho doesn't have a title which we would call seo but what he has more than your site is the keyword density within the body.

If you would to increase just a little bit the keyword density within your content and change the title from Club Penguin Cheats/Tips/Help to Club Penguin Cheats | Tips | Help and install the all in one seo pack to be able to write a description too with your keywords included (and possible as first 3 words of the description), you can beat you can climb higher in the serps.

All these info I took from a simple view, did not used any tool to check the percentage of keywords etc. so I might be slightly wrong. I could of point to some of my URLs which could turn useful to you but i can't (rules of V7N, can't point links to own site).

Hope this helps to penguin you in the #1

well, i just used the same theme blog as #1.

also, #2 is catching up increadibly fast.

also i was wondering where can i get this all in one seo pack?

and when i change the title should i change it to club penguin cheats l glitches l help because i think people search glitches more than they do tips but im afraid it mite be too long and ive had my old title for a long time.

what do u mean increase keyword density? u mean like add club penguin cheats into my blog posts more often?

[searchmaster]

Write your title again

1) It could be Club Penguin Cheats | glitches|Tips | Help |

2) Description as Trapped said. Increase your keywrds density also.

3) What SE likes is refreshing content and most pings submit itto same RSS feeds.

4) Your H1 and title tags are not same.

If you change title your site will disappear for few days (from top 10 or might top 100) but it will come back soon.

Do this all and check back.

Search Master

[watex]

Originally Posted by searchmaster

Write your title again

1) It could be Club Penguin Cheats | glitches|Tips | Help |

2) Description as Trapped said. Increase your keywrds density also.

3) What SE likes is refreshing content and most pings submit itto same RSS feeds.

4) Your H1 and title tags are not same.

If you change title your site will disappear for few days (from top 10 or might top 100) but it will come back soon.

Do this all and check back.

Search Master

1.i changed title to club penguin cheats l secrets l glitches

is that good?

2. how do i change the description?

3. im a noob, wat does that mean

4. again what does this mean, plz help

and y would my rank dissapear for a few days?

thanks
plz answer ASAP

[watex]

also, ive updated my title and its been listed in google, but nothing's changed. i didnt go down any ranks or up any on any search terms i can think of.