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Hello I am turkish blogger,I know little English.but I opened the English health blog.I started writing the article with English translations.I dont know my articles good translation or bad translation.Because ı little speak english.

I wrote 2 articles.better translations which article ? 1 OR 2 Please help me ?


1.Article
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You're brushing your teeth a minimum of doubly every day for 2 minutes, mistreatment halide dentifrice, and flossing frequently. that is all great things for your mouth (and your overall health), however did you recognize that whereas you are being sensible to your oral health, you may even be sensible to our planet?

a day, the common person within the u. s. uses over fifty gallons of water, per the U.S. geologic Survey. Over the course of a year, that very same person uses 107,000 gallons of water for everything from showering to flushing the rest room to laundry dishes to, yes, brushing his or her teeth. it should surprise you to be told that if you let the tap run whereas you sweep your teeth, you are mistreatment two gallons of water—every time you sweep your teeth. that is like gushing 2 of these huge jugs of drinking water right down the drain.
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Magic ingredient soup
Soups are the number one, when comes to losing weight. In various experiments could be shown that they can reduce hunger: a soup as a starter and subsequent main meal take up approximately one-fifth less amount of food and calories.


Another experiment proves that a consisting of individual food court, to drink a glass of water, saturates well less than same ingredients to a soup of pureed. Apparently, a soup lingers longer in the stomach. If some meat or fish is the saturation stops even longer - a hormone is responsible for the consumption of protein.

Healthy breakfast for weight loss

Tip: Eating meat soup with lots of vegetables until you are satisfied. Or begin your meal with a vegetable soup.

Breakfast doesn't have to be

Who's not hungry in the morning, to do without breakfast. The calories saved by no longer obtained during the course of the day, what supports the weight loss. However, who is totally unfit for human consumption without breakfast should choose one that saturates as long as possible.
which translation is better ??? 1 or 2 Please reply.Thanks
 
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