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Old 10-12-2016, 04:21 PM
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simple car sticker design - what do people think?

what do people think of the below design? i'm not entirely happy with it, but it's ticked the boxes i wanted which was low cost (140), and extremely simple.

any quick changes anyone can suggest that might improve the look?

 
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Old 10-13-2016, 04:02 PM
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any views before i get this printed?
 
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Old 10-15-2016, 01:19 AM
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I think, you can check it.. It is too highlighted...





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Old 10-15-2016, 06:33 AM
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I like the horizontal print, only because it's a little easier to read - especially if you've only got a few seconds to read it while moving or at a stop light etc.

BTW - Where's the phone number?
 
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Old 10-15-2016, 09:57 AM
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No website URL or email address?
 
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Old 10-21-2016, 02:39 AM
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With your Blue background, use a strong color like Orange will attract more views. Try to increase the font size to help people easy to read.
 
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Old 10-25-2016, 07:05 PM
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any quick changes anyone can suggest that might improve the look?
You probably should:
-Include a companies URL
-Move all text on cars back instead, because usually in traffic you see only cars back and not the side.
-With todays technology, it's better to invest money into the Physical Web instead
 
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Old 10-31-2016, 04:01 AM
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thanks guys for the replies. there is a url on the car it's just seems small as the compression of the image isn't so good.

we've got it done now so will post a picture soon of the results. i'm very happy with it.
 
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Old 11-02-2016, 06:52 PM
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No website URL or email address?
No phone number?!?!?
 
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Old 11-02-2016, 11:13 PM
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No call to action button?
Obviously you are not going to add a click here button so you need to highlight what the viewer should do:
Call: (Your number)
OR
Visit: MayerCleaning.xyz

If you are using a website URL then make sure it is short and memorable.

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Old 11-08-2016, 12:26 AM
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Exactly, call to action buttons occurs everywhere, personally I like your sticker, simple and clear however use maybe different color for font -flatuicolors or try use adobe kuler for palettes you will get more significant contrast between background and front color.
 
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Old 11-12-2016, 01:25 AM
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I think, text which is sloped downward, that should be in upward direction. It will look much better.

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Old 11-12-2016, 04:16 AM
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Poor colour choices, Too small, ineffective branding. Contact details?

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thanks guys for the replies. there is a url on the car it's just seems small as the compression of the image isn't so good.

we've got it done now so will post a picture soon of the results. i'm very happy with it.
Using your own opinion on marketing material is usually not the opinion to follow. I know that sounds counterintuitive but emotions get in the way of good objective decision making, especially around branding. You probably know this otherwise you wouldn't have asked. The problem is you probably only asked to listen to opinions that backed up your own. You maybe should have come here and said what you planned and asked best practice ideas?

You should have a checklist of what you expect to achieve>whats needed to achieve that>trial and error>ask others for opinion that have no emotional attachment (family and friends)

Your car decal is ineffective as it stands and due to your belief that its good you won't change it. That's poor management of your business I'm afraid.

I'm sorry if this sounds a bit harsh, but its a conversation I've had many times with small business owners who have come to me for help.

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Old 11-16-2016, 12:32 AM
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I don't think it will work, if you are using for marketing purpose. You might use the image for online promotion purposes; hence better option would be to

1)Show a dirty car
2) Well shining car.

Do mention your phone number and company name not on car, but a separate text on left or right hand side. It will look much better.
 
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