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Old 12-21-2014, 07:53 PM
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Please me some recommendation of my long article

Hey, I finished writing an article. Your know..? It is the first longer article which I ever wrote that. I spent 3 days for writing and 4 hours to check and review the article. Now, the 6000 words article have published on my blog but I worry about misspelling and grammar errors of the article. Anyway, could you please when through and read the article as well as give me some recommendation of the article such as styling and grammar problems..?

http://www.basicblogtalk.com/kimseasok/1411-seo-writing-tips-and-tricks-for-better-content

I love to here about the negative of my article, thus please free to comment whatever you want..

Thanks~
 

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Old 12-22-2014, 09:16 AM
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Dude, your English is not really that good. I noticed a mistake right there in the first sentence. Maybe paying an editor is a good idea for this kind of content, especially when you spent so much time working on it. Have you tried any of the online tools, like grammarly?
 
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Old 12-25-2014, 08:17 PM
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No, I never use online tool since I didn't not trust on grammar software.
 
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Old 01-16-2015, 10:24 AM
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Well, even though you have some decent information, the grammar is not very good. You start off right away with “value guest” when it should be “valued guest”. If you are going to post things like this, and you expect to be taken seriously, get yourself an editor who will check this for you. Because this makes you lose credibility in my eyes as a reader.
 
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I refuse to read anything that long.

If you're giving tips on writing, then rule #1 is don't write something that long.

Get your point across in ONE page or less.

Ain't nobody got time for dat.
 
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Old 04-01-2015, 05:29 PM
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Far too long, couldn't get past the first page.
 
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Old 04-01-2015, 07:21 PM
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Its an appalling piece of English writing. The grammar is as bad as it gets. You should do the web a favor and take it down ... it really is that bad.

I would not worry about the length ...I never got past the first paragraph as it was that badly written.
 
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Old 04-01-2015, 08:47 PM
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You should focus on the main ideas and the content of specific customer oriented . Or you can use the online tool to check . It will bring value statements
 
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It's too tangled as for me. It contains much info but not everything is interesting and helpful. You'd better extract essentials and focus on the main idea - that will shorten it and will make it easier to read and understand. As for language, your article is readable and written not badly
 
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Old 04-25-2015, 04:47 AM
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your article is good, but try to improve your english
 
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Old 04-25-2015, 12:09 PM
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your article is good, but try to improve your english
How can it be good if their English is bad?
 
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It is pretty informative.
 
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It is pretty informative.
Did you even really read it?
 
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There are so many mistakes regarding to your grammar, second thing is this that you should have to focus on your target keywords.
 
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