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Old 01-18-2011, 12:15 AM
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Does This Inspire?

my first post. I have to ask you guys a favour? I wrote 2 quotes about myself and I only can write what comes to my head. Could you read this and this and make some suggestions. (constructive criticism accepted)

I seem to have a lot of bad luck on the internet. I have lost a bit of confidence, so am hoping posting here might give me some direction.
 
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First I'd have to ask, your goal is to inspire how? Is it through showing people what you seen through your eyes as you've done in the second link, or is it through example by what you're doing to try to help people? To me, the first post has a sadder tone. Although it illustrates your feelings of being fortunate, but to me, feels allot of negative undertones. The second, again, mostly upbeat, what can be through your eyes and experience. Do you want to inspire them by reminding them of the negative, making them feel fortunate as you do, or do you wish to inspire them by saying, hell, look what Dan did, I wanna do that to? Hopefully this is helpful, maybe it's not. It's just the feelings I get from what I read.
 
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