Any design suggestions for this page

KirkhamsEbooks · 09-03-2009, 01:44 PM

http://martialarts808.com/PPTips/

My primary goal is to make money with adsense. Users will have to scroll past the testimonials every time they get a tip then just below the tip is a link to my book

Rick

nitiahkunal · 09-21-2009, 02:41 AM

I have seen and think that except to the whole white page you need to fill it with some images also.

KirkhamsEbooks · 09-21-2009, 11:15 AM

Thank you

Rick

robertgallagher · 09-22-2009, 12:25 AM

You need some change for make it quality design

stupidg · 11-11-2009, 08:54 PM

First, your website is designed too rough. You could add some images to it.

stupidg · 11-26-2009, 08:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by stupidg

First, your website is designed too rough. You could add some images to it.

Then, make your template more professional. Though now it's rather simplicity.
It is the first step to redesign the site, after that, do SEO.

To get much more useful suggestions.

LindaJM · 11-11-2009, 09:09 PM

A colorful border and banner using your logo would help.

leahmarie · 11-16-2009, 01:22 AM

I recommend to have a Web Template designed according to what theme of your site. Then add some videos, photos and forums so it can attract visitors to your site.

technophobic · 11-16-2009, 02:23 AM

you can get a free template for your site to make it more appealing to the visitors and eventually get you money.. a good design attracts possible customers/buyers.

nitiahkunal · 11-17-2009, 07:58 AM

well have you got the design ?? i have checked and found that yr white page is going on the site same as previous..

KirkhamsEbooks · 11-17-2009, 10:01 AM

Looking at my options and I thank everyone for their help. The most important part of this page is the top where I get my subscribers. I don't expect 90% of the people to read all the testimonials and buy at that time

Thank you once again

Rick

sequencehosting · 11-17-2009, 10:12 AM

Hello,

I suggest adding some more images and color then I think it will look very nice

stylight · 11-17-2009, 11:34 AM

Sorry to say, but it looks amateur. I suggest you either higher graphic designer or use an open platform with off-the-shelf template.

Artificial · 11-21-2009, 07:19 PM

I would look for a free to use Template and edit it to suit your needs, it will turn out more professional looking and better overall.

JennyRipley · 11-21-2009, 08:06 PM

I think your appearance is not good,you should add some colors for it.

loenex · 11-22-2009, 01:37 AM

sorry can't load your page

KirkhamsEbooks · 11-22-2009, 12:12 PM

Loaded fine for me. I added a navy background but it still needs more work

Rick

Gooner Chris · 11-22-2009, 12:20 PM

The content is very good. Perhaps you could use a more professional template? (no offence) I think it looks okay at the moment, but it could easily look more professional.

ultimatewebtrainer · 11-22-2009, 01:27 PM

Install wordpress, find a good clean theme, and put your content in there.

It's headless, and almost footless.. so I didnt know where to begin - someone may mistake it for a spammer site.

It you don't template it - bring your margins in (please), create a stylesheet-- do a quick search for "css stylesheet generator"

one I found is
http://www.csswizard.net/

to obtain some uniformity and flow in your page.

liydjw3 · 11-24-2009, 07:16 AM

Take this as constructive criticism, your page is really boring. The blue text on white background just looks like a page of ads and links. You need a banner, logo, images, a navigation bar might help. You got quite a lot of work to do. At the moment, because of the design, not many people are going to read the content you are offering because it doesn't look professional.

Good luck.

LIYD