Review: holidaycarols.com

Sami4u · 05-05-2009, 01:09 AM

Hi,

Please review my secound Site

http://holidaycarols.com

Yes I know it still need some work but if you find any errors let me know so I cn fix them.

This site was made on my laptop 266 with 64 mg ram in .txt Lost of work bur fun to do.

Thanks in advance of your reviews.

Butterflies Forever

Sami

2advance · 05-06-2009, 04:20 AM

In the Christmas welcome page, the date is wrong, check it out..

riderbabygurl · 05-06-2009, 04:40 AM

^ yeah his right and the design of your site is not that good I mean not advice sable to those who have a poor sighted because it can glare to them.

Sami4u · 05-07-2009, 05:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 2advance

In the Christmas welcome page, the date is wrong, check it out..

The date is right for me?

Quote:

Originally Posted by riderbabygurl

^ yeah his right and the design of your site is not that good I mean not advice sable to those who have a poor sighted because it can glare to them.

I don't understand what you are saying at all can you please elaborate?

Thanks

Butterflies Forever

Sami

peaceful_soul · 05-11-2009, 11:05 AM

Red and greens never gell well together in this quantity. Think of light pink and rosy schemes. or think of shades of red and shades of green. If blended well, it would turn out to be great site. Pictures are good. You need to go along with the themes. Best guide to design and color scheme is nature. Look at nature, you will not find anything which is mismatching. Pictures on your site are good, content is good, color scheme fails.

blooey · 06-22-2009, 08:04 AM

Hi there,

This is my constructive feedback - I'll be as kind as possible.

1) Im not a huge fan of 'Enter' pages unless its to warn users of potentially offensive content. It just creates an unnecessary click process for the user.

2) The red/green is kinda Chrismassy but I dont think they go well together. You should consider using additional colors to the ones you have. Its all too red/gree/white.

3) Who is your target audience? If its kids, then it needs more color and images on the main page, more play skool/ fisher price style. If its for adults, it needs to look a little more mature. Its kinda in the middle at the moment.

Overall it looks very nice and the music is a nice touch!